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June’s Garden

green stalks strong and tall colorful blooms smiling big beaming with the Summer sun June’s moon silky white pink, red, orange, purple hues refuse to go nighty-night

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Date: 6/4/2025 4:17:00 AM
Beautiful Sedoka on the lovely summer with blooms and bright sun. All the best dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2025 6:44:00 AM
xx…thank you, Valsa! We have had a much lighter Spring. I’m not complaining…cooler mornings, nice afternoon temps…and rain, but that keeps us from drought. Bless you, dear!
Date: 6/3/2025 12:26:00 PM
Loved your 'nighty-night, Kim. Keepin' it real.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 3:48:00 PM
Thanks! We get eneregized in the Summer sun :)
Date: 6/3/2025 8:33:00 AM
Lovely imagery. This time of year we get little night in Phoenix, even late in the evening a tinge of afternoon glow. Yes, our blooms hang in there for as long as they can. Struggle for survival, and innate longing for eternal beauty.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 10:16:00 AM
Still, those Arizona skies are so majestic! Thank you, dear one!
Date: 6/3/2025 7:12:00 AM
How pretty and cute is your sedoka, i especially love "June’s moon silky white pink, red, orange, purple hues refuse to go nighty-night" so seamless how your words flow always dear kim! Pleasure reading this gem. Sending you light always
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 10:17:00 AM
Thank you so much! Love writing brevity poems! Hugs
Date: 6/3/2025 2:21:00 AM
- Lovely garden with colorful flowers, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, Anne! :)
Date: 6/3/2025 2:20:00 AM
You have plenty of rainbow colours around. Loved your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 6/2/2025 11:12:00 PM
I loved that cute ending. Is there a sedoka contest. It's similar to what I am considering for my next contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 5:28:00 AM
No, I just decided to write one! Looking forward to your contest :)
Date: 6/2/2025 9:09:00 PM
Wow, Kim- this is pretty! Nighty-night though, from me- lol <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 5:28:00 AM
LOL!

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