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June Or December

He carried June right to his bed With promise that they would be wed But her sweet honey pot Was much hotter than hot He came out missing his "head" He looked straight down at his member It's head burnt off by her ember She was so hot and bold He much preferred the cold It might grow back in December! A Lamleen production Created with my friend Eileen Manassian.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/17/2016 10:58:00 AM

Hi Richard, Loved the collaboration, you both write well together. I never find Limericks so easy, that is why i never do any. Every one i have tried has been a disaster. I always Love the fun element. Well this one has that Richard. A Bravo!!! to you both Richard and most definitely a seven. Brings tears to the eyes. I wince as i remember his member....Vlad.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/12/2016 8:28:00 PM

LOL Hilarious, loved this!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/8/2016 8:49:00 PM

Hahaha... wow, didn't expect this one Rick! "Head" . Very snappy, like a limerick should be. Though I don't about growing back in December (unless you're part lizard ... lol).

Funom Makama

Date: 1/12/2016 8:49:00 AM

Classic, intelligent, sublime and graceful. As usual, yet another excellent piece from you dear poet. Happy new year once again

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2016 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Funom.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 1/10/2016 8:30:00 PM

One would fear or not prefer the cold if it has experience hot and bold. Nicely written Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2016 8:59:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks Verlena.

James Fraser

Date: 1/8/2016 1:38:00 PM

Nice one you two. So love Limericks, for they can brighten up the dullest days ~~ James :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2016 8:57:00 AM

Thanks James.

Mark Peterson

Date: 1/5/2016 6:26:00 PM

Limericks are so much fun and comparatively easy to write, and yours is good. I feel like a syllable is missing in the third line of each stanza. Threw the beat off a bit for me. Something like, "But her sweet honey pot," and "She was so hot and bold." Just some thoughts and readily ignored.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2016 9:45:00 AM

Good morning Mark, I appreciate your suggestion and I agree. I have not written many lymirics so this is helpful.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/5/2016 4:15:00 PM

Well for his sake i hope it does,, wonderful collab you two..love this..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2016 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Harry. I always appreciate your visits.

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/5/2016 8:02:00 AM

Well, that's no skin off my nose..... great fun, both of you. regards, Viv

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2016 8:45:00 AM

You might not want to put your nose to close to the honey pot!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/5/2016 7:15:00 AM

I'm laughing. What a hell of a topic. Well done to you both.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2016 7:21:00 AM

Thanks Scott, all I can say is poor fellow!

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/4/2016 7:16:00 PM

This is a hilarious , great limerick ....I've enjoyed every little word of it.....thank you very much for sharing this delightful poem....hugs / / :) dalia

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2016 7:42:00 PM

Thanks for enjoying our mischevious little piece.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 1/4/2016 4:51:00 PM

Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.............A.M.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2016 6:52:00 PM

Thanks A.M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2016 3:44:00 PM

So hilarious, Richard. I'm thinking: WHAT the HECK? What you two were up to with this one!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2016 6:53:00 PM

Just a bit of silliness!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2016 1:03:00 PM

I read it on Eileen's page a great collaboration lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2016 6:53:00 PM

Thanks and a big hug back.

White Sage

Date: 1/4/2016 3:30:00 AM

read it on Eileen's but it's nice reading it again, nice write...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2016 7:12:00 AM

Thanks for visiting us both.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/4/2016 3:28:00 AM

Funny, very funny, dear Richard! That is what happens when a hot...poetess, like Eileen is involved! Ha-ha! A seven to each!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2016 7:12:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios,she is indeed amazing.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/4/2016 12:24:00 AM

So good to collab with you, Richard....YOU did the lion's share. Thanks for saving this from oblivion by suggesting changes....hugs...my dear friend.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2016 7:14:00 AM

It was my pleasure Eileen. The credit goes to you my dear, hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 12:27:00 AM

One stanza me...one stanza you...and we see it all brand new....nifty title...funny rhymes...me thinks that it's quite sublime....