Judge Not

The congregation eyed him skeptically
     Long hair, a beard and sandals on his feet
Beyond his exterior they’d not see
     This rambler had just come in from the street

He blessed himself with the sign of the cross
     And joined fully in each hymn that was sung
It was soon apparent it was their loss
     When he greeted God with a gentle tongue

“Lord, You sent Your Son to roam on this earth
     His hair was long and to some seemed unkempt
And when He preached, insults were often hurled
     But He was not repelled by their contempt

“And so, Lord, I seek forgiveness for these
     Who cannot see beyond the clothes I wear
I’ll not be put down by those I displease
     I ask for forgiveness, make them aware

“That Your Son sported sandals and a beard
     I ask You judge them not as they judge me”
When the mass ended, the man disappeared
     At heaven’s gate his name’s on the marquis

Some of the congregation dwell below
     But the homeless man now sits by God’s side
For he had chosen love’s path to follow
     Appearances he did never deride



*For Jared's "At First Glance" Contest
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Brown Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 5:05 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Joe Flach's contest "Here Comes the Judge". Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 7:37 PM
Joe apparently liked this entry, and so do I. Congratulations on winning in the contest, Carolyn.
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 12:36 PM
You know I thought this was great and really needed a nice and sweet comment today I'm feeling sad today just don't know why.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Guzzi Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Yup we're just extaneous clumps of atoms at the core all part of the body of the Universe. Great winning write. [I think the BIG G with gather in all the "crumbs though ;)' there's a use for everything!] Light & Love
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Oh my goodness Carolyn this is terrific and this is a well deserved 5th.place win.Thanks for that very sweet congrats on my win with"CRYSTAL"~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Mannan Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 7:43 PM
A very deep and touching write dear friend, many congrats for this win.
Beck Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Yeah, i told you this is like one of my fav stories TOUCH OF THE MASTER....liked it very much and am so very pleased to see you gain a rightful award....best wishes,,, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Joe, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 11:56 AM
I love this remarkable entry for Joe's Contest, Carolyn! Of course one of the many I missed somewhow! My warm congratulations on your always awesome work, Seafaress! This is another for my Favs. List. Love, Audrey
Taylor Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 11:25 AM
Congrats on a well written, well deserved win, Carolyn. Awesome piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Kudos to you. You and yours have a super weekend. luv Ralph
Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Great entry, great story, great win. Congratulations Carolyn. i always look for yor name near the top. Love, Joyce
Inka Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Well done, While one may be the most profound and earth changing judgment of all time. While other has found its wings in your words. P.S. The Munter knot is most commonly a climbers knot looped onto the carabiner for rappell and belay. watch out for twist though
Mehta Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, carolyn
McBride  Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Very Great, many tend to judge the cover of the book, while God reads and takes a look
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Paula Swanson's contest "Not As It Seems". Love, Carol
Hickman Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 9:27 PM
Really a wonderful write and Congratulations on your win in the contest,,we seem always to judge someone and everyone on their looks so much,,this reminded me of the story of the beggar ,,but he turned out to be a millionaire to everyones surprise...Blessings..Cecil
Richards Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 5:49 PM
A wonderful win for you Carolyn, with this great example for Paula's contest! I am not surprised, I loved this when I first read it! Love, Carrie
Maverick Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 9:26 AM
really great piece Carolyn, enjoyed in is a good strong resonating write enough of the smoke and mirrors! lets embrace the challenge.
Knop Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 7:53 AM
Great write, Carolyn! Wish you good luck for Paula's contest!...Love, Gert
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 5:28 AM
Good luck in the contest Carolyn. Wow! Paula sure like's doing contest's....:)
Mehta Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 3:55 PM
yes, please go on.
Pettit Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Wonderful descriptiveness and rhyming are found in each of the verses. Collectively, they convey a great story and lesson that we should not judge a book by its cover.
Johnson Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 1:51 PM
I like this uplifting version of interpreting Paula's contest. So many of us don't look beneath the surface before jumping to conclusions. Thank you for your comments and good luck to you also. I think this will be a high winner. Love, Joyce
Semeniuk Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 11:07 AM
this is truly beautiful! great write!! if our poor world could only hold the views all of our eyes are meant to see.
Beck Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 10:38 AM
I found the story for you at .........http://www.sapphyr.net/largegems/master.htm ............hope you enjoy
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