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January Arrives

January arrives like a newborn baby. It is young, innocent, and full of naivete. As we earthbound beings have known all the while, it’s the first of the twelve to go through the turnstile. The month will be the first to have Father Time write on its page. Can we all comprehend what will be written by the sage? After thirty-one days, January will be out the door. each following month we expect to be more mature. Robert Pettit for Personification of January Contest by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 1/6/2012 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Personification Of January" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2012 7:00:00 PM
flows nicely and well delivered, Robert. Like that "first of the twelve to go through the turnstile" Congratulations on a very fine poem
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Date: 1/5/2012 5:36:00 PM
Nicely done Robert. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/30/2011 2:36:00 PM
Great write Robert! I liked how you transitioned from a baby, to Father Time's writing on the page, to us being more mature!! Very well done!!
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:37:00 AM
I really enjoyed your take on this new babe called January. I called it something else. haha. you will see when I ever post it! I think your poem should do well in the contest (mine maybe not!)
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