Jan You Wary

The Russians, of course, think its cool
To jump in an icy-cold pool
But I'm not a fool
And made a Mule Rule:
Dive only where warmth greets my tool!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Excellent one I found of yours by checking out best new poems list!
Leffanta Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 10:06 AM
Hardly a "best" by any standard, but thank you for reading and commenting!
Poetry Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 11:46 PM
So funny and tremendously smart, I always read and love your insights! salute alkas
Leffanta Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha!
Lawrence Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 11:49 AM
Rico, How did I miss this one ! Belated congratulations on POTD !! Great advice by the way !! Always surprising me . Hugs, Susan xx
Leffanta Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 11:58 AM
You are always in my thoughts as evidenced by today's, "The Norm" Aloha 'oe!
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Rico, congrats for winning POTD. The poetry was fantastic, and the title was brilliant. Blessings ~ Debra
Faulkner Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 12:00 PM
Almost missed this POTD, many congrats, glad to see your witty pen recognized~
Hawley Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 7:32 PM
Icy cold pool, not me, unless of course its 95 degrees outside! Also congrats!
Gilmour Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 12:45 AM
Many Congratulations Rico on your POTD, so funny and so clever you always make me laugh... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Flood Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 12:12 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Rico. May your tool be forever warm. Terry (oops, late again!)
Liguori Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:51 PM
Am I the only one who has lost my innocence? What oh dear would be your tool?!?
Gorelick Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 5:00 PM
Polar Bear Clubs...Nostrovia! Congratulations.
Roper Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Always humorous my friend ; congratulations on POTD :)
Calasibetta Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 4:06 PM
Very clever " Jan You Wary", love your humor and your verse! Congratulations on your POTD! :)Paulette
Peck Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 4:02 PM
I've always thought jumping in an icy river was stupid. Your Mule Rule is a wise one, Rico. I haven't been keeping up with POTD, so didn't know you won. Congratulations :)
Leffanta Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:08 AM
I'd pick a peck . . . .Aloha!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 12:39 PM
Giggles galore! Congratulations on POTD dear poet! Hugs n love ~xomo
Leffanta Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Nice to know you are still alive and well! Aloha!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 12:12 PM
This is so funny Rico. I love your play on words with the title too. Very clever! Thank you for the laughter this morning. Congratulations on having this great Limerick honored with POTD! New year blessings my friend. A great way to bring in the new year. I am saving this one to my Faves! Aloha, Connie xxoo
Leffanta Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:08 AM
Mahalo, Connie! Looking forward to reading your POTDs! Aloha!
Watt Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 11:41 AM
Rico, sounds like a New Years resolution worth making... great title too... congrats on your POTD honor
Gentile Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations Rico on your POTD honors!
Wolf Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Clever title there, Rico! Congrats on POTD.
Awtry Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:04 AM
back with POTD congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 9:27 AM
A fun one, Rico. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. A fun/creative write. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Cheney Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:10 AM
So much great wisdom in this. Lol. Congrats on POTD.
Mcgee Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Fun, funny and a great Limerick...Congrats on your POTD
Merryman Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 5:39 AM
A fantastic limerick, Rico! Made me chuckle. Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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January 13, 2022 at 3:55 AM
- Bathing in ice cold water is a miracle for your tool ... good for blood circulation, Rico :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - // Anne-Lise :)
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