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Its Not Fair

I’m growing old and have no say.. My breasts that once comforted- now droop. Its nice that you are interested in my past, But do you care about my future?. The view from my window is limited, I can see a small corner of the yard. The rose there is dying of neglect, I’m concerned about its future. Not so long ago I ran in the fields, And drank from the stream of life. Now these four walls are my prison… My future rests in the hands of others. Is it too much to ask to smell fresh cut grass? Or feel the breeze and a raindrop on my hand? Do the quail still run up the bank behind the house? I want to go home. For my auntie who lived in a nursing home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/18/2009 8:58:00 AM
Beautifully written. I can feel this one. Sara
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Date: 8/15/2009 5:47:00 PM
Mail returned!
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Date: 8/15/2009 2:02:00 PM
Barbara, this is a subject that we tend to sweep under the rug, so to speak. It's difficult to face, but we need to take responsibility for our precious elderly. They are full of wisdom and need our care and regard. Thanks for this! Donna
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Date: 8/15/2009 12:27:00 PM
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Date: 8/13/2009 2:12:00 PM
Barbara, I did not receive your return mail and am very worried. Please tell me what you think we may do to help our friend.
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Date: 8/13/2009 1:51:00 PM
Urgent soup mail in a moment, Barbara!
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Date: 8/13/2009 1:34:00 PM
Barbara, what a sad write. I hope i never end up in an old folks home. A superb poem through the window of such a place. It saddens me when you see the neglect in some of these homes. Full marks and more on this posting>>James
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Date: 8/13/2009 1:21:00 PM
My Dearest Barbeeg Barbara, Excellent YOU are a master of Poetry A true dedication LOVE Always...Harry
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Date: 8/12/2009 2:14:00 PM
Touching, Barb. I just turned 80 and I can't think of anything more soul-robbing than living in a nursing home, being greatly handicapped. You've captured the feeling so well. Love, daver
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Date: 8/11/2009 8:15:00 AM
Such a wistful picture you paint BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 8/11/2009 6:44:00 AM
This is terrific my friend.. I love how you opened this piece and I was hooked...this speaks about the journey of many...we all start off as a child and eventually will become a child once more...be bless...putting this in my faves.
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Date: 8/11/2009 6:11:00 AM
Barbara, I so agree it's not fair. I just don't have to many good thoughts of nursing homes. I have worked in a few and thats it. Not going to get into it. Love your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2009 4:31:00 AM
I know you wrote this for your aunt, Barbara, but we can all relate to the feelings of wanting to relive the joys of our youth. God bless your aunt; I'm sure you do all you can to brighten her days but, as you say, there is little that can comfort an elder who just wants to go home. Bless you for this heartfelt, moving write! Love, CArolyn
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Date: 8/10/2009 7:28:00 PM
This speaks for many many others as well as your Aunt....so many who want to go home...it is so heartbreaking. You expressed that feeling so well, Barbara.
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