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“Interludes of romance are the brief sweetest moments of one’s life until they finish. The endings can be the most bittersweet of one’s life.” -quote by poet . Autumn is fleeing; there is early snow. My darling, my sunshine, where did you go? All the green grass in the fields where we lay and your warm embraces have all gone away. How brief was the time when you were all mine - a mere interlude, but oh so divine. An Indian summer it was, filled with bliss. All I could want was there in your kiss. You were the sunshine that nourished my soul. Too short was that season in which I felt whole. One day I awoke to find you were gone. Where did you go, dear sunshine, my dawn! The leaves all have fallen to the hard ground. Soon will be mountains of snow all around. For our interlude I’ll constantly long, but all I hear now is wind’s lonesome song.

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Date: 10/22/2023 1:30:00 AM
A magical stroll on a broad boulevard with all the trappings meant for two--exquisite, my friend! My compliments on your winning placement, Andrea, after reading its reasoned purpose! Aloha, William
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Date: 10/19/2023 10:02:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Andrea :) - Many congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 10/19/2023 4:13:00 AM
Quote and rhyme are timeless! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 10/18/2023 10:51:00 AM
Andrea, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image and quote, well done, Constance
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Date: 10/18/2023 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Date: 10/16/2023 2:55:00 AM
A really sweet poignant poem, Andrea, nice quote too:)
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Date: 10/15/2023 8:57:00 PM
This is so beautiful tinted with sadness and longing. Beautifully rhyming too. This goes into my FAVE.
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Date: 10/15/2023 6:47:00 PM
Haunting memories resonate here... And a faint whiff of 'The Summer Wind,' by Sinatra as well. Lovely penned, Andrea! As sunshine leaves, autumn falls...
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Date: 10/15/2023 6:29:00 PM
a touching melancholia and marvellous images for declaration of love, so beautifuly penned, Andrea, thanks for the moment yann
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Date: 10/15/2023 6:12:00 AM
A beautiful poem of love and longing. Splendid write dwelling in memories, Andrea.
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Date: 10/15/2023 5:59:00 AM
So beautiful! A masterpiece! FAV!
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Date: 10/15/2023 3:57:00 AM
Wow, dear Andrea, you've so evocatively described those interludes of love that whisper sweetest moments within brief time.. The feeling of longing and ache is so palpable in this poem.How eloquent is your wordplay here! And the emotions are so poignant.What one had imagined to be a forever love and flame of their lifeline, suddenly faded in the pale colours of autumn and winter freezed every light of hope.."Where did you go, dear sunshine, my dawn!", "but all I hear now is wind’s lonesome song"
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Date: 10/15/2023 2:15:00 AM
A soul stirring, poignant poem that emanates all the shades of grief, how one questions and reminisces when they, summer is gone… so metaphorical and creative! Love this one! Always love an evocative poem. Goodluck for the contest
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Date: 10/15/2023 2:14:00 AM
We are in the middle of an Indian summer. I dread what November has in store for us. Fine weather would evaporate like your love did when you felt whole. But now you will taste the winter of our discontent -just to quote Shakespeare. Blessings and hugs.
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Date: 10/15/2023 1:38:00 AM
I can feel the loneliness in your words.. I chose the same word for mine also..
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Date: 10/15/2023 12:38:00 AM
Another beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this. Have a good day.
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