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For the Imagine, Interlude, Ivory poetry contest by Constance La France.

 

Interlude

"Life is a succession of lessons which must be lived to be understood." 
Ralph Waldo Emerson

In this performance we call life, my spirit searches for an interlude of peace. My poetic mind riots consumed by rhymes, savaging our memories of grieving beliefs. I'm a soul rasping winter's woeful wings, afraid I'll become a poet who ink will forget. I'm trapped in the desert of dejected demons, wandering in aching avenues of dreams, forgotten in ferocious frozen vine's of time, surrounded by meadows of blood poppies, Season of death is a cursed caricature of memories, full of salty tears, bitter goodbyes with spiteful sentiments. Let me sleep in the synchronicity of angels, as ebony horizons drift into darkness. When crimson clouds bleed to paint the sky, I scream at silent scarlet skies, as black rain from a dark storm plunders. Like acid burning my metaphorical paper wings, I float like a butterfly cursed by moths of deceit, as hope dances dangerously with my malevolent muse - grace and hellfire waltz with my heart's chambers. I can't help but remember last November, when death clung to the air around me, as answers we found turned into a designated dead end. In delirious desires of deathless shadows, I still see your daggers and cigarettes in a charcoal silhouette, with your every breath laced with guilt. Yet, the ghost of your voice lulls me to sleep, as the silence crawls along the walls at night. Who are we to judge who is a sinner or a saint. I wonder if you will walk down the stairs of heaven, hold me in all my fragility, remind me of childlike charms, or will rebellious regrets open the gates of hell. I scream at the Grim Reaper to take my soul, ravage me, before I go, but put a white veil on my corpse, so each night when I visit my grave, provocative eyes with loose desires, can feel the wind beneath my sails. But, gift me one more midnight, to create my final masterpiece to paint my dreams, carved with marble white ink, engulfed in sentimental verses - for this is poetry, formless suppressed speech. One day our quill will eternally slumber, as our conscience passes from poetry to dust. In the plight of adversity, only I, truly know, that stars speak stories how simple words were not enough, as truth only prevails through poetic justice.
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Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:11 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, S.O. ... always a pleasure to read fantastic writing :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 4:22 AM
Congratulations, Silent! One day our quill will eternally slumber, as our conscience passes from poetry to dust…with dark imagery, you excel!
La France Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Silent, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the music, and quote, well done, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 9:36 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Have a blessed/great day writing away.................
Poet Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 2:31 PM
Your words, dear Silent, flow like a soothing stream into the soul, filling it with warmth and kindness. Your lines are like bright brushstrokes, producing a work of art filled with emotions. Your diction, metaphors and similes, enriches your poem. Your voice is an excellent extension of your caring and spirit, and your pen glides across the paper, prompting strong feelings. Your words heal, uplift, and remind us of the human spirit, bringing joy to those who read them.
George Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 11:56 PM
Wow.... wow! You are incredible as a poet, scripting masterpieces one after another. The pain and anguish of the mystery called life is so penetratingly expressed here. Each line is a marvel. I am incapable of expressing my appreciation for this poem in words. "Like acid burning my metaphorical paper wings, I float like a butterfly cursed by moths of deceit," Each line conveys an inexpressible emotion, especially the above lines. I wonder what had happened to you in last November ! Into my FAVE.
Parker Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 7:48 PM
the eyes of a true poet see the world through the pain and joy of their soul, where words form within the eternal space that is unmeasurable and can never be filled by either...to feel to sense to ponder with a passion's pen is a gift you give to the reader...my first thought after reading Silent One
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:40 AM
Your thoughts are always spot on.. Great to hear from you my friend..
May Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Finding an interlude of peace is like a lullaby amid the chaos, Well penned Silent
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:41 AM
Indeed it is my friend... we all need it.
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:33 PM
Incredible, and I love this 'Who are we to judge who is a sinner or a saint' honestly, at the throne of God there will be some surprises, sad for some, real joy for others! Anyway, write on dear Silent One, never be silent, you are a beautiful soul, your pen is ever compassionate, emotive, and kind.
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:42 AM
Yes there will... Always appreciate your kindness and support.. There is a minority who want to push me away like they tried last time, spreading lies gossiping.. but I will ignore those with hate in their eyes.... Thank you for your feedback.
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 3:18 PM
Great wonderful poem!
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:42 AM
Thanks
Goldsmith Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 3:14 PM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write/story. "Love It" Your golden pen was working overtime. Love your line, "Who are we to judge who is a sinner or a saint." I leave it up to God to judge. Have a blessed weekend..........
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:51 AM
You are always too kind my friend... Have a nice Sunday.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Fascinating poem, using all figures of speech to produce a magnificent poem. You paint your dreams, but they are also etched in your heart. Perfect diction and magnificent imagery. Best wishes for your contest, Blessings.
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:51 AM
Thank you Victor.. This one is about the loss of someone, who's ghost always returns in Autumn... and some personal aspects aswell..
Buehler Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 12:47 PM
Wow! another amazing poem, Silent One! Many great, imagery rich lines, like: 'Yet, the ghost of your voice lulls me to sleep, as the silence crawls along the walls at night.' Best wishes for the contest.
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:52 AM
Its always the ghosts that leave an array of emotions behind.. Thank you.
Anaya Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 10:58 AM
You're a kind and soulful poet and I had the pleasure to meet you, an honor. "I float like a butterfly cursed by moths of deceit, as hope dances dangerously with my malevolent muse - grace and hellfire waltz with my heart's chambers" real truths, yes who are we to judge. Great entry, SO!
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:53 AM
You are always too kind and I appreciate your support and feedback..
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:04 AM
I'm trapped in the desert of dejected demons, wandering in aching avenues of dreams, forgotten in ferocious frozen vine's of time---When crimson clouds bleed to paint the sky, I scream at silent scarlet skies, as black rain from a dark storm plunders---a symphony of emotions throughout, deliver your theme splendidly, SO. Very creative metaphors and simile enhance your descriptions.
One Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Thank you Vijay
Daniel Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 3:56 AM
Poetry and powerful poignancy go hand in hand in this masterpiece, SO:) well done:)
One Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Thank yoy Joanna..
Sharma  Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 3:44 AM
This is a masterpiece!!! Gosh! I felt my heart immersed in these emotions that you've infused within thought-provoking, introspective and grieving lines."When crimson clouds bleed to paint the sky, I scream at silent scarlet skies", "Like acid burning my metaphorical paper wings", "grace and hellfire waltz with my heart's chambers", "Who are we to judge who is a sinner or a saint" That's really deep! The alliterations and pristinely chosen wordplay definitely made this poem so impactful.Just wow
One Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Thank you for your wonderful feedback Hiya
Sharma  Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 3:47 AM
I think that it's going to be the top winner really, because you've expressed vulnerable feelings of how storms of fragility come and make our quills shiver, sometimes inevitably proving to be destructive.. But, let us ooze every drop of pain in poetry until it turns to dust, as you've so brilliantly written here.. And I can feel the ache here so much. "that stars speak stories how simple words were not enough" And that last line.. Truth only prevails through poetic justice- woah, that's really hard-hitting.. A magnificent write seriously..
Empress Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 2:49 AM
“ Who are we to judge who is a sinner or a saint” that line stood out for me the most! Whoa your poems deserve all the accolades! How seamless and effortlessly your alliterations flow and how you convey so many profound truths is beyond me! Stars know stories whispered in silence so true! Poetic justice it is! Suppressed emotions being expressed, ink definitely will never forget a poet that writes so eloquently! I absolutely love this poem and how you’ve written so many lines especially creating
One Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Yet people will Still judge..saddest thing is when people judge something they have not seen or heard themselves...thank you for your great feedback
Empress Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 2:52 AM
Imagery that is from a true artistic quill! One can not fathom the way you weave words for the poetic brilliance and how you describe emotions, so evocative and soul stirring! I also love the line “ I scream at the Grim Reaper to take my soul, ravage me, before I go, but put a white veil on my corpse,“ made me sad! How poignant and imaginative is that! Brilliant quote to go with your poem too enhances the depth of wat you’ve woven! Im sure this will be a top winner!
Jones Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 1:02 AM
Like acid burning my metaphorical paper wings, I float like a butterfly cursed by moths of deceit, My favorite lines though many more are full of imagery. This is deep and well kinda disturbing lol. It feels like anguish in your soul? It is beautiful and I love the quote and energy there in. I am sure your unique voice in this poem will win in the contest! Love and Light to you.
One Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Thank you Karen..Wanted to go a bit dark and deep on this theme .
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