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Inside My Head I'M Young - For 'Old' Poets Only Contest

My muse is in a whirl For she just doesn’t have a clue Am I eligible to enter this contest … I really don’t know what to do! My age is of no concern to anyone but me I may be twenty-one or I may be eighty three Our friend retired at 35, I don’t class that as old Fortunately for him his investments all struck gold I’ve been posting on soup for well over a year Therefore I can’t enter a ‘new’ poets contest Does this make me an old poet? Can I enter this ‘Old Poets’ contest - that is my dilemma! Contest:- Inside my head For ‘Old’ Poets only Sponsor:- John Lawless 09~11~15

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2015 2:07:00 PM

Haha, a dilema indeed, made me chuckle, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 2:19:00 PM

I am pleased to say I've entered the contest with this poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

James Horn

Date: 9/14/2015 4:58:00 AM

Jan, So do not take an enema or will end up in an enigma while watching a wild cinema. I am 74 myself and been married for 50 years in less than a year. Also, have been in Soup for shortest length of time out of all of the top 40 producers and am currently 20th. Jim Horn

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 7:37:00 AM

Thanks Jim will take your advice:-) Jan x

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 9/13/2015 6:15:00 PM

I definitely fit the requirement to enter this contest, but I don't care to. I've been on Soup for at least ten (maybe more?) I'm too old now to remember exactly when. Best to you in the contest. And thank you for the stop by. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 12:45:00 AM

Oh I am sure your humour would go down a treat with John:-) I do know there are many who don't bother with contests - it is a sore point sometimes when you see wonderful poems not do too well:-(hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/12/2015 10:43:00 PM

Love it <3 a 7 Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 9/13/2015 4:17:00 AM

Just a fun write for the contest Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/12/2015 2:27:00 PM

very clever Jan: Age is just a number he he. If you have been writing since you were three that would make you an old poet. lol Good Luck in the contest, It looks like a winner to me. SuZ

Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2015 3:03:00 PM

LOL:-) I've actually only began properly writing since Feb 2014 I can't believe how well I've taken to it - guess it's been hiding in me for many years now is the right time for it to come to the surface:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/12/2015 1:00:00 PM

A cute way to relay your dilemma, Jan! Love it. All the best for the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2015 3:00:00 PM

Thanks Sandra I had fun with this tongue in cheek write:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/12/2015 8:49:00 AM

You are forever young dear one.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2015 9:12:00 AM

Aww Richard you are too kind:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/12/2015 4:29:00 AM

One becomes old when he stops dreaming and starts remembering no matter what the age might be! Get out of the dilemma and enter the... poets contest for you are young since you are writing such a fine poetry, dear Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2015 6:18:00 AM

A pure tongue in cheek write Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2015 12:07:00 AM

yes you CAN, yes you CAN, NOw come on, Jan. Finally reveal your age to us TOOOOO GREAT job here. You are old now that you have been here over a year!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2015 6:18:00 AM

I've been here about 18 months can't believe the journey I've been on know I would never have got through without discovering writing:-) hugs JAN XX

Tim Smith

Date: 9/11/2015 10:11:00 PM

Age is just a number....it is all in how you feel and take care of yourself.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2015 6:17:00 AM

Just a fun write Tim there are contests for OLD and NEW poets not sure where I fit in lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Thomas Martin

Date: 9/11/2015 6:10:00 PM

Per usual, grace and imagery make a noteworthy, memorable write!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 6:18:00 PM

Thanks Thomas just a tongue in cheek write for the 'old' poets contest:-) hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/11/2015 5:14:00 PM

You'll know you're old when you sit down for awhile and when you get up it takes 4 or 5 steps to straighten up..I'm not sure you're there yet..

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 5:15:00 PM

Not quite Frederic lol Just a fun take on the theme seeing that there are contests for 'old and 'new' poets lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/11/2015 2:42:00 PM

That is a dilemma indeed that I do not know the answer for but this is worthy of the entry!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 2:47:00 PM

I had fun with this Cas a tongue in cheek write - as you know our muses can be very temperamental and this is where she took me today:-) hugs Jan xx

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 9/11/2015 2:42:00 PM

Old bitter poets say they are from France, you my dear, are a beauty! oh la la !!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 5:07:00 PM

Oh my dear Etienne I hope you get all the help you need and return home soon:-( hugs Jan xx

Etienne Lariviere
Date: 9/11/2015 3:02:00 PM

No, I have escaped the institutional ward, only to come to France and find I escaped not at all!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 2:46:00 PM

Oh Etienne it is always a delight to hear from you :-) I gather from your name you have french roots but do not live in France and now way are you old!:-) hugs Jan xx