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the day the pen stops writing about you no blood will flow from these empty veins poetry will remain forever silent no longer will the tongue dance to the tune inside this heart an invisible soul will ascend in silence no more deep sighs just a breathless goodbye and you my love what will become of you? Silent One Simple Musing 13 December 2017

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/23/2018 1:33:00 PM

Hi Silent, this wonderful write does come straight from the heart. Your musings are of the golden variety my friend. You are an inspiration and your poetry does sing into the mind and touch the soul. It is always an honour and a pleasure to read your work my friend. A FAVE. have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Elaine George

Date: 4/28/2018 9:04:00 AM

Musings from the depth of the soul. Very heartfelt my poetic friend. Sincerely, Elaine

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/29/2017 10:51:00 PM

Marvelous. Whatever you compose, it reaches super excellence. Blessing n Best wishes.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/29/2017 10:27:00 PM

well done -JT

David Smith

Date: 12/27/2017 3:18:00 AM

I silently applauding this great piece. Silent one. Powerful words used wisely. Hope your Christmas was not too silent as tis the season for a little vocal variety. Best regards David in NZ

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 12/25/2017 3:52:00 PM

The Beauty In Your Deep Words Always Inspire Me Silent One!! Love This...Vickie

Rick Folker

Date: 12/23/2017 12:09:00 AM

EXCELLENT!!! Magna Cum Laude adelphos mou

Silent One
Date: 12/23/2017 10:23:00 AM

gratias tibi

Frances Schiavina

Date: 12/22/2017 9:39:00 AM

That's great poetry! It seems to be really running through my veins.

Silent One
Date: 12/23/2017 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Frances..

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/21/2017 7:44:00 AM

Would be a sad day when ink runs dry, this may be simple but says so much. x

Silent One
Date: 12/23/2017 10:56:00 AM

Thank you..

Fj Thomas

Date: 12/20/2017 11:21:00 AM

This is much more than a "simple musing" S1. It is beautiful in it's sadness.

Silent One
Date: 12/23/2017 10:56:00 AM

Thank you..

Shubham Pal Chowdhury

Date: 12/19/2017 9:59:00 AM

I like you poems silent one.

Silent One
Date: 12/23/2017 10:56:00 AM

Thank you..

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/18/2017 6:14:00 PM

Hi Silent, This is not simple at all. I'm sure your love will continue to read your heartfelt words. If she doesn't what will become of her? You both keep each other alive. As always excellent piece my talented friend:-) Alexis

Silent One
Date: 12/23/2017 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Alexis..

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/16/2017 5:48:00 PM

Your beloved would probably read your awesome love poems over and over again with tears in her eyes…an awesome touching write Silent One!~Che :)

Silent One
Date: 12/17/2017 3:26:00 PM

Im sure she would... Thank you Che

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/16/2017 9:03:00 AM

Poetry is this, Silent One:):) awesome:)

Silent One
Date: 12/17/2017 3:25:00 PM

Thank you Jo..

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/15/2017 5:07:00 PM

Silent One, your lovely poetry, with all of its beauty, emotions and imagery will live on in the written words you have gifted and shared. An intriguing and thought provoking poem with a unique point of view that I found deeply enjoyable. Your sixth and seventh stanzas are so beautifully poignant. Shining poetry.. ~Susan

Silent One
Date: 12/17/2017 3:24:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment..

Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2017 4:17:00 PM

When our muse dies, part of us dies with it, and our pen will lie idle and forlorn. // paul

Silent One
Date: 12/15/2017 2:17:00 PM

Yes... Thank you Paul..

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 12/14/2017 3:36:00 PM

I don't think these words are wasted at all. Some people just take longer to understand, to their detriment. These are beautiful heartfelt w.ords

Silent One
Date: 12/15/2017 2:17:00 PM

Thank you Patricia..

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 12/14/2017 3:01:00 PM

Quite touching...soupmail

Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/14/2017 8:11:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words of encouragement. I've posted the write. This could easily be a great contest!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/14/2017 1:26:00 PM

A gorgeous write!

Silent One
Date: 12/14/2017 1:30:00 PM

Thank you..

Anand Parmale

Date: 12/14/2017 12:21:00 PM

Very touching write...I am sure she won't let this all happen...She will hold you dearly and wont let love escape

Silent One
Date: 12/14/2017 1:30:00 PM

Thank you, sometimes words are wasted on some, my friend...

Pipping Stars

Date: 12/14/2017 6:29:00 AM

seems like a lot of mocking of "my love" going on around this site ... other than that ... another ban would be nice ... oh yeah ... take these dots ... ... ... ... ... ... ... yeah ...

Silent One
Date: 12/14/2017 6:34:00 AM

What are you talking about?

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/14/2017 5:23:00 AM

I love how you said "simple musing" yet they are fully powerful, which they will forever sparks in all of us readers. Me 100% I know... Beautiful! Hugs and smiles :)

Silent One
Date: 12/14/2017 6:10:00 AM

Thank you, sometimes it is the simple words, that are so much more powerful...

Maria Williams

Date: 12/13/2017 11:42:00 PM

Unique in its Simplicity, yet packs a powerful punch. Words of yours will be read again and again by your loved ones, what a wonderful Gift of thoughts and feelings, a priceless legacy for them...Maria

Silent One
Date: 12/14/2017 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Maria..

John Hamilton

Date: 12/13/2017 10:47:00 PM

Simple musings? Not so simple as it appears, that's why I started putting thoughts and feeling on paper after my cardiac arrest, 5 years ago, I still feel the urgency to get it all out. Thanks for posting this gem!

Silent One
Date: 12/14/2017 6:11:00 AM

Thank you, some words will always go down in time, I guess...

Frederic Parker

Date: 12/13/2017 6:01:00 PM

even in death to think of a loved one, that is true love

Silent One
Date: 12/14/2017 6:11:00 AM

True...