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"Incubus, a demon or evil spirit descending on a sleeping woman to mate while she sleeps . . . a dream, an oppressive nightmare." Dictionary
three times an Incubus has invaded my dreams it always begins the same quite lovely the first time I was young it was a demon man who came second time it was an ugly ogre (well that was not lovely) the third time it was Lucifer himself and it always ends with me in terror the first time I was having a sweet romantic dream something most young women will often do the man was a handsome warrior who stood beside my bed staring at me then, he began kissing my lips and caressing me so gently but everything changed and his hands got rough I looked at him ... he had changed into a demon and was gone when I started screaming my nightgown was ripped apart and my body was covered in bruises and wounds I was so ashamed I did not tell anyone the second experience was with an ogre that followed me home one evening but, I began running to get away from him and I locked my door shaking that night he crawled into bed with me he was an ugly hideous little monster and he wanted to kiss me but, I fought till he left because I prayed to God this haunted me for days and still creeps me out I can still see his bloated body the third time I was dreaming of being in Paris I was having a cafe and reading a map when a handsome man approached, lost? not lost, I said, just looking for places to visit let me help . . . he offered let me be your guide I liked him and so, I said yes through winding streets he drove very fast ending up at the entrance of a cemetery I thought that was so odd to be visiting a cemetery very famous he said so I followed him and things got very dark and quite strange we were at the entrance of a crypt when he grabbed me and carried me inside it was set up like a grand bedroom and in a flash he was all over me it was an assault and when I looked into his red eyes I saw Lucifer I was found wandering the cemetery but, of course, it was just a dream or was it ? I could not sleep for months after sometimes, he tries to enter my dreams but praying to God keeps him away _____________________ March 13, 2023 Poetry/Free Verse/Incubus Copyright Protected, ID 03-1531-247-13 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Fictional write Written for the Standard contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol. 35 sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 03/23/2023 First Place

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Date: 3/26/2023 8:00:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellently composed, ominous write, Constance:-) Very gripping from beginning to end!
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Date: 3/26/2023 10:52:00 AM
Edward, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the congratulations and compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/24/2023 7:37:00 PM
Constance, many hearty congratulations on your first-place win! Clean vibes you portray.
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Date: 3/25/2023 9:21:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the congratulations, and compliment. A very difficult theme to write about. Blessings, Constance
Date: 3/24/2023 8:08:00 AM
Creepy and scary Constance. Brilliant! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/24/2023 6:22:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, yes, very creepy ! Blessings, Constance
Date: 3/23/2023 8:40:00 PM
You have dealt with a concept, which I find difficult, very beautifully. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/24/2023 6:22:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/23/2023 5:47:00 PM
As dark as it gets, vividly portrayed. Congrats on your top win, Constance!
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Date: 3/24/2023 6:23:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, yes, very dark, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/23/2023 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on the win. WOW!!! Your "Incubus" is a wonderful story/write. Your pen was working overtime on this write. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 3/24/2023 6:24:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the the congratulations and compliment, I seem to have a talent for writing deep dark and creepy, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/23/2023 1:51:00 PM
Spooky - dark and haunting, horrific... Glad it isn't real. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/24/2023 6:25:00 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the congrats, yes very dark and horrific, I always amaze myself that I can write so dark, blessings and love, Constance
Date: 3/23/2023 11:24:00 AM
This is a wonderfully written poem. The storytelling is impeccable! Very deserving of the win~
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Date: 3/23/2023 1:05:00 PM
Akanksha, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, writing and win, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/14/2023 9:10:00 AM
Have you done a deal for the film rights ? This is epic !!
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Date: 3/14/2023 1:55:00 PM
Peter, thank you so much for the compliment, it would make a great horror story for sure, I could add more details no problem, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/13/2023 9:47:00 AM
Dreams sure can be disturbing, and our subconscious does tend to wander. Never sure if dreams are telling us something, but for some reason the dream is always the opposite of what you think it is.
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Date: 3/14/2023 8:19:00 AM
Paul, thank you so much for the visit and comment. These nightmare dreams have bothered me for a long time and finally, I was able to write about them. I have no idea what they mean but like you write in your comment, it could be totally the opposite of the actual dream, blessings, Constance

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