In Your Loving Lap

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Written on 1st August 2023

For "Put yourself in their shoes" contest

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Momma, I love to lie on your sweet lap, Listening rapt to the stories you tell, Sometimes, your words lull me to take a nap, And I sleep deep, all my fears you dispel. Your lap is the most comfortable place, I can lie here forever, peace waves wash As you stroke my head and caress my face, I feel relaxed - your kind touch, evils squash. Will you let me lie here when I grow up? Spin me stories of fairies and magic? In your loving lap, I feel cocooned, yup! All's right with the world and nothing's tragic! Large as your heart is, your lap's e’en larger, You welcome me to rest my weary head, A little lap love's my power charger, I love you, momma, and your soft lap bed.

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Date: 4/23/2025 7:11:00 AM
Awe how sweet and so true. The sense of security that place exudes is addictive. Xo
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Date: 4/22/2025 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations!!! on being in the winner's circle of The Mother's Day poetry contest!!! All of them were winners but how could I not include this one. I just had to put momma's lap in the lineup. Nicely crafted. Even brought a tear to my eye. Thanks for sharing!!!
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Date: 8/28/2023 10:28:00 PM
"Large as your heart is, your lap's e’en larger" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/28/2023 12:12:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful poem for the contest. Congratulations on your win, Joanna. Eve
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Date: 8/28/2023 6:27:00 AM
Joanna, Congratulations on your win, which is truly deserved, as your poem is a masterpiece crafted with such exquisite precision and beauty.
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Date: 8/27/2023 9:31:00 PM
A touching tribute to all mothers. I don't think that we ever outgrow our mother's lap. Congratulations, Jo :)
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Date: 8/14/2023 6:39:00 PM
A sweet lullaby, congrats Jo on a belated visit on your potd.
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Date: 8/4/2023 7:34:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 8/4/2023 12:13:00 PM
Love this Joanna such a wonderful Poem a favorite and congratulations on receiving POTD...
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Date: 8/2/2023 6:15:00 PM
Joanna, your words bring comfort and support, unconditional love. This line touched my heart so deeply: "Will you let me lie here when I grow up?" It doesn't matter how old we are, a mother's love is always needed. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/2/2023 4:09:00 PM
Congratulations to you for potd, Jo!
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Date: 8/2/2023 3:05:00 PM
So sweet. Love it. Congrats on POTD. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/2/2023 11:22:00 AM
Hey, look who's turn it is. Sweet poem for mama. I honestly can't ever remember my mom reading to me. Have a great day
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Date: 8/2/2023 11:09:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jo - A sweet poem :) - hugs
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Date: 8/2/2023 11:03:00 AM
That’s so lovely Jo, I remember the comfort of my mother’s lap, nothing is a comforting as that. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 8/2/2023 10:43:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD win. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 8/2/2023 9:38:00 AM
Such a sweet poem. A mother's lap is the most cosy and comfortable place for a child . Congratulations Joanna on your POTD . All the Best in the contest.
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Jo. It brought back memories of my childhood and my loving and comforting mother. Thanks for sharing your life experiences through your poetry, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:38:00 AM
Back to say congrats on potd!
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Date: 8/2/2023 6:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem Joanna. Congratulations on Your, POTD. Keep Rolling
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Date: 8/2/2023 6:47:00 AM
Wow! Such a beautiful work! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/2/2023 6:35:00 AM
Sweet write Jo. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 8/2/2023 6:16:00 AM
There's no love like a mothers love,congratulations on your poem of the day Joanna.xx
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Date: 8/2/2023 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Jo. Is there more peace anywhere else than mother's lap? You expressed with beautiful tender words.
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Date: 8/2/2023 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Very nice. Enjoy :)
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