In the Stillness of the Night

In the stillness of the night,
                                  A rhythmic echo I can hear
                             Where peaceful dreams take flight;
                             A drum, drum, drumming in my ear.

                                A rhythmic echo I can hear,
               A thump, thump, thumping in the hollow of my chest,
                             A drum, drum, drumming in my ear,
               A pump, pump, pumping against my burdened breast.

               A thump, thump, thumping in the hollow of my chest,
                      A tick, tick, ticking from the clock in the hall,
              A pump, pump, pumping against my burdened breast;
                      I hear the lonely sounds, of a hoot owl’s call.

                      A tick, tick, ticking from the clock in the hall,
               A thump, thump, thumping in the hollow of my chest,
                      I hear the lonely sounds, of a hoot owl’s call
             A pump, pump, pumping against my burdened breast.

              A thump, thump, thumping in the hollow of my chest
                        Where peaceful dreams take flight;
          A pump, pump, pumping against my burdened breast,
                            In the stillness of the night.



Date: May 11, 2022
For: A Pantoum of Five Stanzas Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: L. Milton Hankins
Rhymes verified on rhymezone.com
No placement in contest

Date: August 16, 2022
For: "Your second chance 1st poetry contest poetry contest"
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Date: 6/8/2022 8:12:00 PM
what i hear is the thump of the width and breadth of a heart worthy to be....great poem
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Date: 6/9/2022 6:59:00 AM
Thank you, Timothy~I appreciate you stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 5/22/2022 1:25:00 PM
Such a lovely penned piece Paulette, great rhyme and flow along with super imagery too. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 5/23/2022 10:44:00 AM
Gordon, glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 5/21/2022 5:51:00 PM
Paulette, you have a remarkable and brilliant way of words. Such a stunning picture that paints!!! Unquestionably an amazing piece of poetry... In the silence of the evening, especially if we are under a lot of pressure, we are able to pick out each and every little sound... The writing is just stunning...
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/22/2022 7:34:00 AM
My friend, your comments, as always, lift my poetic spirit;truly you are an inspiration to me. Thank you. Have a wonderful day! :)Paulette
Date: 5/20/2022 7:41:00 PM
The rhythm and the beauty of the poem are indeed striking ! You have made a great entry for the contest in a most difficult poetic form ! You 'll be a winner. All the best, Paulette !
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Date: 5/21/2022 11:42:00 AM
You always give me the most positive comments~thank you dear Valsa! :) Paulette
Date: 5/20/2022 1:36:00 PM
Sound effects that surely affect (us) - esp. in the still of the night. Lovely penned, Paulette! :) gw
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/21/2022 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Gershon~ah! glad you found the sound effects' compelling. :)Paulette
Date: 5/20/2022 8:14:00 AM
WoW! Paulette, You penned a well-written entry for the contest. It is well written, but it also makes sense—nice flow, content, and imagery. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/19/2022 9:16:00 AM
Outstanding way to take the pantoum challenge. I smell a winner here!!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/20/2022 7:24:00 AM
Thank you for your generous comment~hope it is a win! :)Paulette
Date: 5/16/2022 2:50:00 PM
This evokes both the quiet and the fear of night, I think, the repetitive beat of thump thumping and pump pumping is used for great effect, best wishes for the contest~
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Date: 5/17/2022 11:03:00 AM
Michelle, thank you~yes, I felt the repetitive beat Etc. was effective~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 5/15/2022 7:15:00 AM
I like the repetitive lines, good luck in Milton’s contest.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/15/2022 12:13:00 PM
Thank you Eve~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 5/14/2022 10:54:00 PM
What an beautiful imagery!!! Absolutely a great poetry... In the stillness of the night that too when we are in stress, we could hear all those minute noise... Beautifully written...
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/15/2022 12:13:00 PM
Thank you Supraja~glad you enjoyed it~I know many of us can relate, we have all experienced the “minute noise” we don’t hear through a busy day. :)Paulette
Date: 5/14/2022 10:39:00 PM
Paulette, I like the repeating motif of sounds echoing in the stillness, along with the wonderful way you have braided these lines into your pantoum. You have captured a sleepless night so well. Blessings ~ John
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/15/2022 12:11:00 PM
Many thanks for commenting. Glad you enjoyed it. As you probably surmised I was catapulted into this poem after a sleepless night that I know many can relate too. :)Paulette
Date: 5/12/2022 7:48:00 PM
For sure, silence personifies all -- even the quiet itself becomes a sort of rhythmic echo shouting out hollowness. Well said. Mysterious.
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Date: 5/13/2022 6:43:00 AM
Yes, even the stillness and the silence has a melody all its own. Thanks for stopping by my friend. :)Paulette
Date: 5/12/2022 5:04:00 PM
Such perfect rhythm, Paulette, great entry for the contest. Good luce, Bill
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/13/2022 6:44:00 AM
Thanks Bill~I let the stillness of that night lead me right into this poem. LOL! :)Paulette
Date: 5/12/2022 1:36:00 AM
In the stillness of the night Paulette is dreaming up a storm of poetic words, so rat ta ta tat to my favourites, amazing and ingenious poetry.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/12/2022 12:15:00 PM
thanks Harry~glad you thought it ingenious~it came to me out of the sleepless night. LOL! :)Paulette
Date: 5/11/2022 10:22:00 PM
The night is not as silent as we imagine it to be especially if we are under stress.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/12/2022 12:15:00 PM
You are so right about that....".silent" night has it's own sounds. Take Care! :)Paulette
Date: 5/11/2022 6:39:00 PM
Wow! A great one! Reminds me of Poe’s “Bells.”
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Date: 5/12/2022 12:16:00 PM
thanks Kim~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
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