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In the Empire of the Ice

(These are 2 etheree I put together to form a double etheree. They were inspired by the marvelous documentary movie "March of the Penguins.") In the Empire of the Ice: “The Plunge” & “When Childhood Ends” They poke small heads out from underbellies; feeling chill, retreat; and shivering, remain a while longer where it’s safe. Nourished by both parents, the chicks adapt. One day they’re left alone, but Sea soon beckons them, and . . . they take the plunge. Five years they play, chase warm waters’ flow and grow with stomachs always full before black heads emerge from sea. . . Swollen bellies slide on ice. Upright, they resolutely waddle miles home. . . fierce winter storms not prevailing.

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Date: 11/24/2020 10:46:00 PM
Delightful etheree pair of a species that we can learn a lot from.
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Date: 11/24/2014 8:13:00 PM
Really,really good! Great Movie, great poem!
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:34:00 AM
I loved the movie and they are masters of survival these little birds. A wonderful poem Andrea. love phyl
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Date: 1/27/2011 5:16:00 PM
Another beauty from you,Andrea!I will try this shape----kashinath
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:09:00 AM
Penguins are so lovely creatures! We here have a small zoo with some penguins and...they survived the floods in August when about 50 animals had died there. Enjoyed your poem and thank you for your always kind comments on my work!...Gert :)
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Date: 1/22/2011 12:17:00 PM
March of the Penguins - One of the most powerful films I have ever seen. Incredible etherees, Andrea. Your talent has no boudries. Lainie
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:52:00 AM
awww this is sweet and describes my favorite animal so very well! love,Deb
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Date: 1/22/2011 6:57:00 AM
wonderful story! Andrea! beautiful form! jimbo
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:18:00 PM
Now I am anxiously awaiting to read your entry for the Valentine's Day contest after reading your funny comment Andrea... hope it's not too long a wait luv..haha..
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:36:00 AM
enjoyed this piece Andrea, those penguins really do underwater flight, and certainly are a hardy speices.
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:16:00 AM
What got into him was the man from Raleigh's nose. I too love the Etheree. Saw the picture - amazing! Good write y'all. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:14:00 AM
From Julie Heckman on "Fall"...I received your comment...to bad you don't understand what a "phase" is
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Date: 1/21/2011 7:46:00 AM
A precious poem about the penguins Andrea.. and their plight for survival.. so aptly written and presented to make us feel their lifestyle luv.. enjoyed and good luck if for any contest..luv. happy weekend..
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:20:00 AM
Nicely written, enjoyed the subject, and learnt something ! Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:14:00 AM
Andrea, I absolutely love penguins and you made me smile right through this beautiful write of yours.. :) lovely double etheree, love Wilma
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Date: 1/20/2011 9:37:00 PM
You have beautifully portrayed the penguins and their enviornment. Amazing poetry Andrea.
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Date: 1/20/2011 7:13:00 PM
Penguins are fascinating birds. We had birds similar to these in the Northern Hemisphere known as "Great Auks". Unfortunately, these birds were hunted to extinction almost 200 years ago. You have described everything here quite well.
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:55:00 PM
Terrific form and content Andrea my friend.. an awesome poetic piece ... thankxx for your sweet comments on my latest contest entry luv..
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:26:00 PM
Nicely done, Andrea. I had a smile on my face thinking of the penguins sliding on the ice with their swollen bellies. Interesting use of the form as well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:57:00 PM
The second story of my poem I helped needy is somewhat true and the help in cash exxagerated, Andrea. I still see the lady whenever I make a stop in London.
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