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In the Elevator

When I let one loose in the elevator, it wriggled and slithered and hissed and seemed to eye the passengers’ pantyhosed legs. It climbed up one’s heal, bore fangs. She screamed. I grabbed it from the screamer’s ankle And said, “No fear! Just Simon the snake! He’s only come for April Fool’s Day. Now see this on-off switch. He’s fake!” Contest name: When I Let One Loose In The Elevator Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 2/22/2024 7:28:00 PM
This was so funny. We all need a little funny. Snakes just give me the creeps. I am glad I wasn't present for the elevator visitor, fake or not. I enjoy your poems. I'm glad to have found this one surfing around tonight. :)
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Date: 6/30/2022 11:02:00 AM
I got the biggest laugh from this Jennifer - thanks for sharing! Linda
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/30/2022 1:08:00 PM
I’m glad. I like making people laugh.
Date: 2/22/2022 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Anil! Glad you like it.
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Date: 2/22/2022 3:02:00 AM
Enjoyed.shalom shalom
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Date: 2/8/2022 3:12:00 AM
Poetically hilarious. What a scare! Great piece Jennifer
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/8/2022 1:19:00 PM
Hi Eshe! Glad I could give you a laugh. Have a blessed day.
Date: 1/12/2022 1:37:00 AM
Oh.... what scare it must have given to an unsuspecting person on the lift ! Great imagination dear Jennifer ! Equally frightened and humored !
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 1/12/2022 8:26:00 PM
Hi Valsa! Glad you like it!
Date: 1/8/2022 10:25:00 AM
… I love this ! I would have screamed for sure . Great imagination Jennifer . A shiver , a giggle and a smile of relief at the end ! Happy New Year ! Susan :)
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 1/8/2022 11:26:00 PM
Glad I could give you a new year laugh! Happy New Year to you!
Date: 9/1/2021 8:41:00 PM
"Now see this on-off switch. He’s fake!” Oh my ! I wasn't expecting that. (I am giggling) This is such a cute poem. Thank you for the smile this evening. :) Brandy
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 9/2/2021 4:45:00 PM
Glad I could bring you some laughs, Brandy! Thank you for stopping by.
Date: 9/1/2021 6:55:00 PM
That gave me a chill even if it was funny. I would most like turn white and panic. love phyl
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 9/2/2021 4:46:00 PM
Hi Phyl! Thank you for visiting me!
Date: 8/30/2021 4:43:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... your humour brought on a smile Jennifer - Lindsay
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/31/2021 6:18:00 PM
Hi there Lindsay! So glad I could bring you a smile! Have a blessed day. Jennifer
Date: 8/30/2021 3:12:00 AM
Very funny. Kind wishes, Kai
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/30/2021 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Kai! Thank you for visiting me.
Date: 8/25/2021 9:18:00 AM
Glad it wasn't a real snake, fun one, Jennifer-
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/25/2021 12:51:00 PM
Hi Michelle! Thank you. Glad you like it.
Date: 8/25/2021 7:07:00 AM
LOL, fun poem... Ann
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/25/2021 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Ann! I had fun writing it.
Date: 8/10/2021 5:05:00 PM
This is so hilarious, Jennifer. This is my kind of funny poem! Love ~ Mala
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/10/2021 7:17:00 PM
Thank you Mala! I’m always glad to bring some laughs to my friends.
Date: 8/4/2021 8:59:00 PM
Oh, Jennifer, this is hilarious. A good April-Fools Day poem. Well done. Carol Louise
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/5/2021 9:01:00 PM
Hi Carol Louise! Glad this poem is worthy of the word hilarious. Thank you for stopping by.

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