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In Falling Snow

In my dream the pure white snow is falling and I see your car on the road as it slides and spins into a deep ravine and my dream spirit floats to you and the snow is falling, falling, falling I kiss your still cold lips while lovely memories wash over me I see us at our wedding in love ... dancing to a romantic song and laughing at nothing in a quaint cafe we liked going to and snow is falling It is so cold my love as I hold you in my arms the snow is piling in odd drifts so cold ...and I awaken shivering to the telephone ringing, ringing, ringing hello ... and my heart is shattered like pieces of glass and I stand at your grave in winter with frozen tears as birds sing in the falling, falling snow the trees moan and whisper did I hear my name in the wind did you call my love _________________ July 24, 2022 Poetry/Imagism/In Falling Snow Copyright Protected, ID 07-1475-645-24 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/26/2022

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Date: 7/26/2022 1:00:00 PM
Very emotional poem, Constance. A lost love one but the memories remain with you. Great imagery and the snow kept falling throughout the poem. Good luck in the contest. Enjoyed the u-tube song also. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Constance La France
Date: 7/26/2022 3:55:00 PM
Bill, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, I love this group and the song, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/24/2022 2:55:00 AM
A heartfelt write Constance of a lost love. It brings out deep emotions of your love for that deceased special person. The imagery you shared was spectacular. I can see it all as you wrote it. Congratulations on this beautiful Poetry that is heartfelt... God bless you...
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Constance La France
Date: 7/24/2022 3:26:00 AM
Michael, thank you so much for the beautiful comment, I appreciate it so much, this is basically true, I had a premonition in a dream and it became my reality, hope you liked the song too, blessings ~Constance

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