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In An Enchanted Forest

Groggy, I lay my unsteady head down. My soul coiled from turmoil, soon forgotten. To a whirling tunnel I fall, fall, fall; a sleep that knits a cradle of cotton. Amid an enchanted forest, yielding old timber with faces, and creeping plants. Where wildlife talk and rainbow fairies dance all frozen in time by mistral wind chants. I'm jealous of the nights. Oh, so alone wanting to spend it with someone I love swept away in the darkness tenderly loving me even with the light above. I turn to sound of shuffling leaves. The door irised open and tendrils of blue smoke bands of warm magic made my skin tingle. The Prince of my dreams came through, then I woke. 11/10/12017

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Date: 2/21/2020 4:17:00 PM
Totally enchanting, Eve. Full of longing and then reality! Really nicely done. Congratulations on your HM.
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Date: 12/9/2017 3:25:00 PM
This is just wonderful, Eve, enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your well-deserved win - blessings! :-)
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Date: 11/26/2017 7:56:00 AM
An 'enchanting' and well-written poem, Eve. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/26/2017 7:12:00 AM
Eve, such a beautiful poem, congratulations on your win in my contest !
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Date: 11/26/2017 1:22:00 AM
Delightful, beautiful, and nice to see the word 'irised' take a bow. A worthy first, Eve, jolly well done, young lady. Viv x
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Date: 11/25/2017 9:19:00 PM
Many congrats Eve on your wonderful win with this amazing write. Beautifully penned with enchanting and enticing imagery!
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Date: 11/25/2017 12:55:00 PM
A great take on toy contest theme Eve and this piece is beautifully penned, congratulations
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Date: 11/25/2017 12:11:00 PM
Beautiful Eve A cradle of cotton Does Amazon sell them? LOL Congratulations!!
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Date: 11/25/2017 11:15:00 AM
Such a enchanting theme Eve, you took me to a magical world:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2017 11:29:00 PM
An enchanting poem, Eve. Love it!!
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Date: 11/11/2017 6:41:00 PM
wow, Eve, it was so cool to see this just now. I had just gone to the contest page and thought about what to do. I too had decided I would use quatrain form (possibly dizain) and do it on Enchanted Forest. HOwever, as I read your poem, I realized my poem would not look anything like yours. Your poem is totally YOU, Eve. It's so imaginative and almost surreal, as if a dream. I hope I can make mine this amazing but doing it in a very different way!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/11/2017 8:22:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, you just made my day Hugs
Date: 11/11/2017 2:48:00 PM
oh, this is such a joy to read
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Date: 11/11/2017 1:32:00 PM
A magical write Eve...GL in the contest
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:08:00 AM
You wrote this very well Eve... great imagery, and a happy ending just like sleeping beauty..
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Date: 11/11/2017 6:05:00 AM
Sure feels magical--lovely words--best for a win, Eve!
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Date: 11/11/2017 5:09:00 AM
What a glorious write, one that is so full of emotionally charged tendrils all stroked throughout my friend! I surely loved reading this fascinating poem here this morning! You have cast away all doubt by your incredible skill, what an impressive piece, Great Work Eve!!
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Date: 11/10/2017 10:02:00 PM
As an enchanting poem, with a happy ending! Beautiful!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/10/2017 10:41:00 PM
Thank you dear friend, you are always inspiring ... Hugs

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