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Written 15th October 2023

Fiction

Imagine, Interlude, Ivory Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France

Imagine…… Imagine if our love was on display To declare we are in love, this I pray We’d be singing along in sunshine’s ray Romance would light up each night and each day. Longing to hold you but afraid I can't A thousand kisses on your face I'd plant Desiring to share enchanted romance If destiny ever gives us the chance. I'd climb mountains and walk many a mile Just for a glimpse of that beguiling smile I'm dreaming of that lovely day meanwhile The day that we can celebrate in style. To me you are as flawless as a rose I would gift you my heart, as Heaven knows. …..If I loved you.

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/21/2023 10:27:00 PM

This is beautiful. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 7:01:00 PM

Thank you very much indeed Karen, appreciated… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2023 9:55:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Belle :) - Many congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 7:00:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise, this win was nice to see after being away on holiday… Belle

brenda Joyce

Date: 10/19/2023 6:35:00 AM

Oh my simply beautiful.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 6:58:00 PM

Thank you Joyce, very much… Belle

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2023 4:06:00 AM

Congratulations, Belle! A beautiful write!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 6:53:00 PM

Thank you very much Kim, I’m delighted with the win… Belle

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 10/18/2023 11:22:00 AM

Wow Belle...MANY CONGRATULATIONS on the 1st place in the contest. A gold medal it will be very well deserved for such a beautiful poem, full of love. Something that we all need. Very well expressed. I take my hat off Belle... Have a nice afternoonxxx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 6:52:00 PM

Thank you Maria, have been on holiday so I’m late replying to these lovely messages. I’m truly grateful for your kind words… Belle

Constance La France

Date: 10/18/2023 10:42:00 AM

Belle, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 6:42:00 PM

Thank you very much Constance, have been away on holiday, this win was a nice surprise to come back too… Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/18/2023 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I enjoyed reading this one. Love your love heart picture. Have a blessed/great day writing away

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 6:57:00 PM

Thank you Paula, I’m so pleased you enjoyed the read. Just got back from a holiday in the Lake District and this win was a lovey surprise to rsturn to. Enjoy your day… Belle

Ink Empress

Date: 10/18/2023 12:33:00 AM

“ To me you are as flawless as a rose” this line stood out for me the most! What a heartfelt and beautiful poem this is flowing in such eloquence. I love the rhymes and depth of this, and the way you’ve written in a very descriptive manner too! Brilliant take on imagine. So unique and lovely

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 6:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Ink, I truly do appreciate your words, I’m late responding as I’ve been away for a break in the Lake District where it’s beautiful in the fall… Belle

Lin Lane

Date: 10/15/2023 3:05:00 AM

You must love so many with your big heart, Belle. How fortunate for them. Hugs.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/15/2023 7:52:00 AM

Thank you for that Lin, I try my best… Hugs, Belle

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 2:48:00 AM

This is so lovely and romantic with great flow and rhymes.... to me you are as flawless as a rose... lovely lines Belle..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/15/2023 7:49:00 AM

So nice of you, thank you Silent One… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/15/2023 2:05:00 AM

It is a pity destiny did not give you the opportunity of being truly in love. Lovely poetry. Blessings.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/15/2023 7:47:00 AM

Victor, destiny did bring me true love, still together, married fifty five years in December. The poem is entirely fictional. Thank you you for reading and commenting. Blessings, Belle