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I'M Only Six

I'm only six years old as I enter his room He sits me down as he makes me at ease To settle my nerves as he tells me he'll help And free my mind, and escape it's seize "Listen Melissa, please don't be afraid We will take our time, and determine these dreams Lie back, count to ten, into a deep sleep you'll go I will be here, what you see now is no dream" It all started with scratching on the wooden floor As I watched shadows appearing on the ceiling and walls Hands, paws so grotesque as big as can be Mimicking writing in confusional scrawl " Melissa, can you remember, anything bad from your past? Something that means, that it shouldn't be so Remember, your only six years old I'll let you go back further, let your young memory flow" I'm, I'm, sitting on my bed, the lights flickering Tears, I'm in tears holding my teddy bear Watching my building blocks, move across the floor Hands, paws so grotesque, I'm in frightened scare "That's good Melissa, your doing so very well Tell me about the blocks, what do they mean Is this nightmare your having Telling us more than it seems?" From under my bed they crawl, making scraping noises Reaching for some bricks, big and small Their upside down I can't read them The shapes are the same, as the ones on the wall It, It, says daddy, it says my daddy The blocks, that's what they say It's now starting to appear, scratched on the walls With a snap of his fingers, so grotesque like paws! Written - 11/6/2010 7:29:00 PM

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Date: 7/27/2015 2:14:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write James! Brilliant work!
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James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 2:58:00 PM
Hiya Dr.Upma, glad you like it, much appreciated, James :) :)
Date: 7/26/2015 4:58:00 PM
a bit scary and well penned James
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James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 2:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for honoring my poem Shadow, it's always appreciated, hugs//James :):)
Date: 7/26/2015 4:28:00 PM
JAMES, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2015 2:57:00 PM
Hiya SKAT, much appreciated, always//James :) :)
Date: 7/26/2015 4:05:00 PM
The imagery brought tingles down my spine James - a chilling write:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 7/28/2015 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Jan, one of my favorite's to be honest, hugs//James//xxx
Date: 2/26/2012 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in Joe Flach's "Twisted Minds" contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:53:00 PM
a bit of Twilight Zone??? Wow!! You created a story that makes me want to know more!!! (I think....on second thought, maybe it is to scary before bedtime?)
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:01:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest James and congratulations in your placement. I liked the alternating narrators in this poem and loved the ending - if, perhaps I got it right. The adult/hypnotist/psyhciatrist character is the girl/patient's father?!?!? That's the way I read it anyway which, indeed, was quite the twist for me - and scary, I presume for the patient!
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:21:00 PM
You are bang on Sir!
Date: 2/25/2012 4:41:00 PM
BIG congrats in this Twisted contest, James. And wow, I see it also nabbed a spot in the first round of the bigger contest!
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Date: 8/15/2011 5:43:00 PM
James congrats to you for a fantastic write and making it through the first round...best of luck to you in the finals...luv shannon
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Date: 8/9/2011 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being once again featured this week before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. The best to you in the contest James. Carol
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Date: 8/8/2011 2:24:00 PM
Congrats James on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all with luv...
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:02:00 AM
James, Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/2/2011 4:36:00 AM
Superb writing James. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:17:00 PM
As usual you write so well, I got past the scary to the workmanship of your poetry.....Karla
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:22:00 AM
Quite scary and halloweenian type write, James
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Date: 11/7/2010 4:29:00 AM
Ow gee. .this gave me goose bumps. .Terrible indeed . .bad so bad. Glad to read you today James !
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:33:00 PM
ok the hair is sticking up on the back of my neck now, scary stuff James
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:36:00 PM
creepy
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:34:00 PM
How scary for a six year old to have to experience. Thanks for sharing, James.
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