I'M Only Six

I'm only six years old as I enter his room
He sits me down as he makes me at ease
To settle my nerves as he tells me he'll help
And free my mind, and escape it's seize


    "Listen Melissa, please don't be afraid
    We will take our time, and determine these dreams
    Lie back, count to ten, into a deep sleep you'll go
    I will be here, what you see now is no dream"


It all started with scratching on the wooden floor
As I watched shadows appearing on the ceiling and walls
Hands, paws so grotesque as big as can be
Mimicking writing in confusional scrawl


    " Melissa, can you remember, anything bad from your past?
     Something that means, that it shouldn't be so
     Remember, your only six years old
     I'll let you go back further, let your young memory flow"


I'm, I'm, sitting on my bed, the lights flickering
Tears, I'm in tears holding my teddy bear
Watching my building blocks, move across the floor
Hands, paws so grotesque, I'm in frightened scare


    "That's good Melissa, your doing so very well
     Tell me about the blocks, what do they mean
     Is this nightmare your having
     Telling us more than it seems?"


From under my bed they crawl, making scraping noises
Reaching for some bricks, big and small
Their upside down I can't read them
The shapes are the same, as the ones on the wall

It, It, says daddy, it says my daddy
The blocks, that's what they say
It's now starting to appear, scratched on the walls


     With a snap of his fingers, so grotesque like paws!









Written - 11/6/2010 7:29:00 PM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 2:14 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write James! Brilliant work!
Fraser Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Hiya Dr.Upma, glad you like it, much appreciated, James :) :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:58 PM
a bit scary and well penned James
Fraser Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Thank you so much for honoring my poem Shadow, it's always appreciated, hugs//James :):)
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:28 PM
JAMES, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
Fraser Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Hiya SKAT, much appreciated, always//James :) :)
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:05 PM
The imagery brought tingles down my spine James - a chilling write:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Fraser Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Jan, one of my favorite's to be honest, hugs//James//xxx
Brown Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 4:40 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in Joe Flach's "Twisted Minds" contest James. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:53 PM
a bit of Twilight Zone??? Wow!! You created a story that makes me want to know more!!! (I think....on second thought, maybe it is to scary before bedtime?)
Flach Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Thanks for entering my contest James and congratulations in your placement. I liked the alternating narrators in this poem and loved the ending - if, perhaps I got it right. The adult/hypnotist/psyhciatrist character is the girl/patient's father?!?!? That's the way I read it anyway which, indeed, was quite the twist for me - and scary, I presume for the patient!
Fraser Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:21 PM
You are bang on Sir!
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 4:41 PM
BIG congrats in this Twisted contest, James. And wow, I see it also nabbed a spot in the first round of the bigger contest!
Deane Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 5:43 PM
James congrats to you for a fantastic write and making it through the first round...best of luck to you in the finals...luv shannon
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being once again featured this week before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. The best to you in the contest James. Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Congrats James on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all with luv...
Freeman Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:02 AM
James, Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 4:36 AM
Superb writing James. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
Null Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 8:17 PM
As usual you write so well, I got past the scary to the workmanship of your poetry.....Karla
Mehta Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Quite scary and halloweenian type write, James
Bloomsfield Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Ow gee. .this gave me goose bumps. .Terrible indeed . .bad so bad. Glad to read you today James !
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:33 PM
ok the hair is sticking up on the back of my neck now, scary stuff James
Culverhouse Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 7:36 PM
creepy
Hilliker Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 7:34 PM
How scary for a six year old to have to experience. Thanks for sharing, James.
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