Get Your Premium Membership

If Ever We We'Re Never

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Charles Messina.


Example for my "LAY It On Me" Poetry Contest

How your smiles appear on my face How my love, you take...and embrace How your heart beats into my chest How my feel, feeling you...feels best How your beauty never gets dry How my heart, aches...seeing you cry How my life would be if never How your love, was not mine...ever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/13/2020 10:14:00 AM
So romantic, who wouldn't love to receive this message written on an anniversary card from a spouse. Lovely, Charles.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/1/2020 4:58:00 PM
Great penning, Charlie. It will be hard to top! HAPPY NEW YEAR, my friend!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/31/2019 11:36:00 PM
How this touches the heart; so very beautiful Charles.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2019 1:37:00 AM
Thanks for this wonderful example... I like these lines: "How your beauty never gets dry How my heart, aches...seeing you cry." (Thanks also for my placement in your last sponsored contest.) God bless you. Happy New Year to you and your loved ones.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2019 10:53:00 AM
Charles, so beautiful and emotional, well done !
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2019 8:34:00 AM
I dont think I've tried this form before, hanks for the example I will see if I can come up with a poem for you:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 8:06:00 PM
Great sample Charles, I've never done LAY before--Oops! Spoke too soon ~ Aloha always William
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2019 7:44:00 PM
Ahhhhh. Poetically gorgeous.
Login to Reply
Messina Avatar
Charles Messina
Date: 12/27/2019 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. :)

Book: Shattered Sighs