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I Yearn For Long Summer Days

Anacreontic Verse Busy buzzing bees and beautiful butterflies sip nectar from pretty flowers in my garden. Colourful pansies, scented sweet peas, pink begonias and red carnations brighten the borders. I sit in the sun enjoying the warmth and beauty that surrounds me. Summertime - I just adore this season of the year albeit only for the few warm sunny rain free days that we get on my tiny isle in the UK! Anacreontic Verse 4 Contest Sponsored by Edward Ebbs 07~22~16
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Scars Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Back with my congrats lovely Jan :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Johnson Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Sounds like Our Puget Sound Weather in the state of Washington. But summer can be beautiful here, just not long enough.congratulations on a worthy win. Love, Joyce
Allison Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Thanks so much Joyce:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Umbrella at the ready...Congratulations Jan
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thanks Charlie - I hope it doesn't rain tonight I painted our patio table!:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Congrats!!!
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 7:22 AM
Congrats Jan. I flew into London once and the fog was so thick they had to tie a rope from the stairway of the plane to the terminal doors.
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 7:29 AM
That's scary John - the worst flight we had was to the IOM when my son was about 10 weeks old and in a 'carrytot' car seat... the flying conditions were so bad the plane was delayed about 3 hours - in the end there were only about 8 on the plane.. They had to get a tractor to tow the plane to the terminal and the hostess had to walk with us as the carrytot was almost taking off in the gale force winds - scary... but we still moved to the Island lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:50 AM
I am so glad I didn't miss this Jan. Congratulations on a well deserved win!
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 5:51 AM
Many thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:04 PM
Congrats, Jan. I like the twist at the end. Where in the UK are you?
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 5:51 AM
I live on the Isle of Man which is mid way between England and Ireland:-) hugs jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Congrats Jan :)
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 5:52 AM
Thanks for a great placement Ed:-) hugs Jan xx
Marie Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 4:27 PM
I am totally a summer gal and the imagery of your lovely, descriptive words is amazing! You have captured the special moments of the season in all it's joyful simplicity. Most impressive once I read you are from the U.K. considering the rain you live with, like myself on the WestCoast of Canada! Beautiful write, you are a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 2:46 PM
I think the title says it all lol - we don't get long summer days just the odd few nice days and then back to dull rain lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Great job ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Thanks as ever for your uspport CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx
Schneiter Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Words don't have to be fancy or exotic to create stunning images. This lovely poem makes that point with compelling clarity. I enjoyed every word of it, Jan. Thank you for sharing it. hugs x x
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 2:48 PM
I write in a simple style ... preferred form is humour Paul but I do enjoy writing more serious poems from time to time:-)hugs Jan xx
Daniel Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Nice one, Jan:) In our place, it's just hot, hotter and hottest..
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 2:48 PM
Thanks Jo I couldn't cope with extreme heat:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Jan! Love this, such a wonderful flow it carries lovely lady, good luck! It will place well, I'm sure :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 2:54 PM
Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 3:39 PM
I am just back from Galway and a visit to my eldesty brother Derek, Jan. He does sound for summer festivals and is convinced the weather patterns have changed to wet summers for ten years now. No wonder our childhood summers seem more sunny!
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 2:55 PM
I know we have memories of childhood and they definitely were sunnier - I agree the weather patterns have changed and I know we have less sunny days now:-( hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 10:40 AM
I think it would be the only down side to living on your island. you get too much rain and gloom? I adore summer and am glad to be where I am. GREAT job, Jan. I have one to post also. If only I could get reads on my last poem!!!
Thirtyseven Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 9:26 AM
I'm with Demetrios, South Australian summers last for a while too. Though can become a little too hot. So much so that you end up inside anyway. Enjoy the warmth.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 4:38 AM
Come to Greece my dearest, Jan, and write such beautiful verses but for endless summer days! Haha! Good luck!
La France Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Jan , nicely done for the contest, and I am loving this 7 ~
Duggan Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Nice little poem Jan, I know we live in a very hot country but at the moment it is winter and it is Bloody freezing and wet, but to you it is probably warm, bring on the summer, I hope your son enjoys our country, what part of Oz. is he coming to, hope you are well my friend.......Vera
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July 22, 2016 at 4:02 PM
You should come to Florida...it's always summer! Love the write!
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 4:17 PM
I've not been to Florida for many years Mike - would love to return one day:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 2:34 PM
lovely, jan! enjoy them when they come...
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 2:38 PM
We have had the hottest day of the year on Monday - next week showers are predicted as per the norm lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Chircop Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Jan maybe We could swap weathers...My being yearns for some rain,preferably with snowflakes : )..Enjoyed your poem ..and the flowers bloomed so wonderfully.
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Yes you can send some sun and I'll send some rain Charma:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 1:59 PM
- We had a great summer day yesterday, but I did not enjoy it ... terrible cold - Long to the next ..... summer day ..... :(( - A lovely poem, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Thanks Anne Lise - we don't get a long spell of warm weather just the sprinkling of warmish days:-( hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 1:42 PM
A pretty summer picture Jan...wish it would last longer for you.
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 1:44 PM
We get some good days in fact I think Monday was the hottest day of the year - we are in the gulf stream so don't tend to get extreme temperatures experienced in GB Hugs jan xx
Turner Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Love the vivid picture you apint of your garden, Jan.
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thanks Daniel:-) hugs Jan xx
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