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I'm even envious to myself Even through my eyes If you were to view what I see Truth can never deny I see a person so special Spanish eyes lured me so An aura that I had yet to see I now witness, before me glows I'm no longer envious to myself Even through my eyes If you were to view what I see Such beauty in her lies http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/lorena.php

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Date: 8/23/2011 10:30:00 PM
I really like that last line. Such beauty in her lies. It's a paradox and yet I can SEE it!
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Date: 8/19/2011 9:39:00 PM
Im a bit confused..its a great poem but I fear that you are writing in sorrow..BG
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Date: 8/19/2011 7:34:00 PM
a stimulating read James ..with intriguing lines of anticipation to know who u see with your eyes.. enchanting piece luv..
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