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I Thought You'D Always Be There

Just yesterday morning my saga to you put an end of my life, I can attest. To the deep sadness felt to the marrow of my bones. The grieve and hurt flow through the narrow aperture of my heart. I just can't remember your face and I cry and people shy away they have the temerity to avoid a proclivity for irony and negativity. I've seen agonizing anguish and I've seen death mourns, the loss of a family and friends, but only when I lost you, I felt the barren nakedness unpleasant layers of a nuance and hurt. But I always thought that You'd always be there. Won't you look down upon me, Jesus and ease the pain. 11/25/2018

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Date: 1/5/2019 8:06:00 PM
Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/23/2018 11:26:00 AM
yes Jesus will ease the pain for sure. Beautifully expressed sweet Eve. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. :)-luloo
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Date: 12/2/2018 8:24:00 PM
Very sad and heart-touching. It is one of the hardest things to go through...may you be blessed.
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Date: 11/30/2018 9:01:00 PM
Dear Eve...your deep sadness and painful loss are felt in your very emotional, heartwrenching poem. My heart is with you. Congratulations on your placement. Love and hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2018 6:33:00 PM
Eve, you have penned this poem with so much emotion, pain is dripping from your words. A big congratulations on your win ~
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Date: 11/28/2018 9:28:00 AM
Palpable pain in this fine write. Congratulations on your win Eve, hugs, xomo
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:58:00 AM
A heartfelt write Eve..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/27/2018 9:52:00 PM
Sad sad write, congrats Eve on a fine placement!
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:17:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Eve - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season - beautifully heartbreaking piece. :-) <3
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Date: 11/27/2018 7:24:00 PM
Congrats!!! Eve on this great write for a win my friend...love & light...hope all is bright...^WW^
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Date: 11/26/2018 9:52:00 PM
So sad and poignant. Beautifully done. Hugs to you.
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Date: 11/26/2018 9:03:00 AM
If this doesn't win the contest I will be surprised. Eve, this is so sad and knowing it came from your heart and soul makes it even sadder. Here's hoping that you find each day a bot easier to smile.
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Date: 11/26/2018 7:05:00 AM
This poem tugs the heart..your words are heartfelt..excellent write Eve. A win for you.
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Date: 11/26/2018 4:44:00 AM
I have tears reading your heartfelt lines Eve, keep on writing my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/26/2018 12:05:00 AM
I really enjoyed your beautiful free verse, Eve.. So heartfelt!! Many blessings!!
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Date: 11/25/2018 11:46:00 PM
Lovely poem, Eve.
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Date: 11/25/2018 10:39:00 PM
beautiful, hugs, hugs, hugs, hugs!
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