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Poetry/Rispetto/I Still See You
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1600-239-25
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 25, 2023

Submitted to the International Contest, Any Poem Not For A Contest
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged, 01/02/2024

Third Place

Rispetto, in Italian means respect. The Rispetto lyric is generally composed of eight (11-syllable) lines. The rhyme scheme is usually ababccdd.

"This love never dies because it is immortal and eternal, it exists in my heart until that day he takes my hand again." Quote by _Constance The snow covers your cold tomb my one true love, your life short- but our love is forever; I will not forget when you left for above, your face, kisses and voice will not leave ever. I see you in the morning and in the park, in each moon and the stars that glow on nights dark; I see my true love in all beautiful things, and in each lovely bird song that soars on wings !

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/10/2024 3:06:00 PM

Very sweet and soulful Constance. Congratulations! :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2024 5:36:00 PM

Linda, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings, Constance

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2024 1:00:00 PM

You left your name on top of the poem but I still placed you.. might get a telling off now.. lol... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2024 5:05:00 AM

Silent, thank you for the contest and my placement, appreciate. Sorry for not removing my name after the quote, that was not intentional I assure you. You are very kind. Constance

Ink Empress

Date: 11/28/2023 11:28:00 AM

This made me tear up and feel so much dear constance. Even death cant kill true love, yes in moon stars and more your beloved is always there with you. Connected beyond physical matter. You are such a strong soul, i hope your thanksgiving went well. Sending you light always

Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2023 2:32:00 PM

Ink, thank you so much for the comment, and compliment, love and blessings

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/25/2023 4:16:00 PM

Very lovely smooth Rispetto poem! Have a nice day ~ AA

Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2023 2:33:00 PM

Abdullah, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate, blessings

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/25/2023 3:15:00 PM

stunning, Constance! You've beautifully captured the immortality of love with your imagery. I felt a little sadness as I read your poem but was uplifted when I read, "I see my true love in all beautiful things...wings." A perfect ending ... and I agree with your quote at the beginning. Have a splendid day, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2023 2:34:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, I love those lines too, blessings

Deb M

Date: 11/25/2023 2:17:00 PM

Unbelievably beautiful Constance….a tender touching heart write! Debx

Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2023 2:34:00 PM

Deb, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings