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dropping his trousers ‘full moon’ is on view to all … too much alcohol 15th April 2015

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Date: 4/20/2015 7:11:00 PM
Made me giggle, enjoyed! TY!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/21/2015 1:06:00 AM
Thanks Lizzy:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/18/2015 10:28:00 AM
My first viewing of a humorous Senyru Jan. Lovely chuckle this Saturday afternoon, hugs//James xx
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Date: 4/18/2015 12:16:00 PM
My first attempt at a funny one too:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/18/2015 3:40:00 AM
Why did I not see that one coming! Hilarious senryu!!! XD Always, Laura
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Date: 4/18/2015 6:17:00 AM
LOL Laura - I have never tried a humourous senyru before and I am loving the reaction it has received lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/17/2015 7:59:00 PM
I take that back maybe she means a bum or something else I am not seeing. I feel pretty stupid right now!
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Date: 4/17/2015 11:59:00 PM
;-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/17/2015 7:57:00 PM
Does she mean boobs????
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/17/2015 11:58:00 PM
Behave! Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/17/2015 6:37:00 PM
Very charming, great write Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/17/2015 6:45:00 PM
Thank you my friend - I was truly shocked by Andrea's comment ... and we thought butter wouldn't melt NOW we know different!:-) Love and hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/17/2015 4:24:00 PM
Love it Jan. I want to see that full moon above those trousers. lol love phyl
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Date: 4/17/2015 4:31:00 PM
Ha ha ha Phyllis! Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/17/2015 7:49:00 AM
Jan, I so admire your humour, you find the funny in everything, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my very looooong poem, the story of my life, I used every character allowed, lol
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Date: 4/17/2015 7:58:00 AM
I try and write with humour no matter my personal circumstances :-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/16/2015 6:18:00 PM
Hi Jan, Hilarious hun,( I see a bad moon arising,lol xx)Our buddy will love it . xx
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Date: 4/16/2015 6:24:00 PM
I hope he sees it one day Jenny lol - great minds - I did title it bad moon rising but got no reads so changed it lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2015 4:30:00 PM
LOL Hilarious!!! Thanks. I needed that! 7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/16/2015 4:31:00 PM
Not everyone appreciates my humour Edwin - I'm so glad I made you smile:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2015 11:32:00 AM
- Thanks for all the smiles you share, dear friend Jan !!! - Love it !!! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/16/2015 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise - even during the bad times we still need to smile:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/16/2015 8:45:00 AM
As usual you have managed to capture humor and weave it into a poem that is easy to relate to and understand. Good work, this ranks as one of your best efforts. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/16/2015 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Emile - you comment made me smile - one day I cooked a beautiful meal my hubby said 'this is one of your better efforts' i nearly hit him with the saucepan! hee hee :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2015 8:36:00 AM
To answer the question... "Is nothing sacred on The Soup?" Answer: NO! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:39:00 AM
Not when we are around Jack !!!!! - and why not bring a smile to someone's day - life is all too short!:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2015 3:32:00 AM
Nice and interesting write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 4/16/2015 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Ravi:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 6:59:00 PM
A week ago Eileen changed my persective on drinking a quiet cup of coffee and now between you and Andrea i am sure i will view moon rise in a new light forevermore. Is nothing sacred on soup? Just love it Jan. Another 7 my friend. love Shane xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/16/2015 3:19:00 AM
I am seeing Andrea in a new light - i saw a pic of the moon rising - now I tilt my head over and giggle when I get a comment. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 6:22:00 PM
Lol! Thats hilarious! :) <3 Tash
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Date: 4/15/2015 6:24:00 PM
Thanks Tasha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 4:54:00 PM
lol...I saw Andrea's comment...priceless Tim
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Date: 4/15/2015 4:56:00 PM
I was shocked to read that from Andrea! lol - Andrea is amazing and a wonderful asset to soup:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 4:17:00 PM
Oh dear my friend... this is too funny. Who needs limerick when you can do this with haiku...LOL ~Janet
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Date: 4/15/2015 4:21:00 PM
Odd what springs into mind isn't it - well knowing me its not odd : lol I wrote the bus on Monday morning lol :-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 2:26:00 PM
haha, and if you look at the picture sideways...... the meaning is more obvious.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/15/2015 4:57:00 PM
I keep turning my head to the left every time I get a comment now LOL:-) hugs jan xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/15/2015 2:28:00 PM
ha ha ha I hadn't noticed - TRUST YOU lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 2:16:00 PM
Jan,funny write made me laugh,and think of next time I see the moon,always Tony
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Date: 4/15/2015 2:21:00 PM
Its a rare phenomena Tony but it can occassionally be seen on a Friday or Saturday night lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 1:33:00 PM
Too much information! LOL!! Sara Thanks for stopping by..
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Date: 4/15/2015 1:35:00 PM
I was VERY careful with the image I chose Sara lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 1:32:00 PM
ha! you're hilarious, jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/15/2015 1:35:00 PM
Glad to know my British humour is understood - thankfully there are wonderful people like you to support me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 1:31:00 PM
Hey I was slow to understand. Now I got it. " full moon" on view...on dropping trousers. Awesome. Witty. Great sense of humour...#7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/15/2015 1:34:00 PM
I know of someone who claims to do it regularly after a night on the beer - thankfully I have never witnessed this event lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 12:50:00 PM
Nice picture of the Moon. I feel haze in shimmering alcoholic light here. Beautifully done. 7 is sure. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/15/2015 12:53:00 PM
Thanks as ever BL:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/15/2015 11:38:00 AM
Jan, this is quite a witty senryu! Very original take on the moon "dropping his trousers." Love it! Always a seven. Love, Carolyn
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/15/2015 11:39:00 AM
Thanks so much for dropping by Carolyn:-) Hugs Jan xx
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