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I Saw God But Now What

Did you ever look up to the big bright blue sky,
I did and I saw the blue eyes of God.
I know He is watching over me,
with blessings everywhere.
Did you ever look into a face with a smile,
I did and I saw God smiling back at me.
Today it rained,
I saw the tears of God coming down.
We can see God everywhere we look,
most do not look and some do not care.

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Date: 4/14/2024 9:51:00 PM
"We can see God everywhere we look, most do not look and some do not care." So very right. Most people do not care to see God. With your innocent eyes, you looked at God and smiled and He smiled back at you. God is omnipresent and his presence is there everywhere. Well written, dear friend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/15/2024 8:51:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my write to be an Well written. Thanks... Your words made for a happy day. Yes, God is omnipresent/his presence is there everywhere. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/14/2024 6:58:00 PM
As they say: If you can't see Godliness in your friend's face -- then you're living in the dark!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/15/2024 8:48:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, we do need to see God in our friend's face. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/14/2024 2:31:00 PM
On another spectrum to my way of thinking, but I do understand from where you are originating with that feeling and idea. One always hopes for a kind, generous and loving God - but to my way of thinking ... God will have His/Her angry darkness within Him/Her, when that time everyone is waiting for arrives. I have a love/hate relationship with God and if He/She is generous, kind and understanding, He/She will accept that for the time being. Let us hope I do not go to Hell for these thoughts. Excellent write Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/15/2024 8:45:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my write to be an Excellent write. You put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Yes, one always hopes for a kind/generous/loving God. God has had angry times in the past. May we hope we can go to heaven & not to Hell.... Have a blessed day writing away...............
Date: 4/11/2024 11:43:00 AM
Dear Paula, Your words about seeing God in the sky and in smiles are beautiful. It poetically shows how nature and kindness can be windows to something divine. The rain as God's tears is an interesting image - perhaps a reflection of the world's suffering? A Lovely Read! - Blessings, Daniel
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/11/2024 1:12:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my write to be a lovely read. Yes, God is everywhere... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/11/2024 10:26:00 AM
Beautiful, once the eyes are opened, God's presence and beauty surrounds one : )
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/11/2024 1:11:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my write to be Beautiful. Yes, God's presence/beauty surrounds one. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/11/2024 8:36:00 AM
wow, I love how you did this. Now that I see how I could do this, I am afraid to copy you!! haha. I'll have to think of different ways to see God.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/11/2024 1:09:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your wow. Glad you enjoyed my write. You will think of something... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/10/2024 5:35:00 PM
You 'saw' Him because you sought Him. I agree...kind of sad that some don't see God...for He's truly everywhere. Best wishes with the contest, hugs & blessings, Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/11/2024 1:07:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your Best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/10/2024 4:21:00 PM
A poem of truth. Well written. God has created all of this for us to see in all ways, every day. :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/11/2024 1:06:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my write to be a  poem of truth/well written. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/10/2024 3:26:00 PM
God shows up in all of life. You are right, we choose whether or not to see him. God bless!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/11/2024 1:04:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing, Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, God shows up in all of life. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/10/2024 2:40:00 PM
Poem of nature and of God's love. It is perfect for spring weather of renewal.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/11/2024 1:03:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing, Glad you enjoyed my write of God's love. Winter is gone/spring is here, hooray... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/10/2024 2:24:00 PM
"I saw the tears of God coming down. We can see God everywhere we look, most do not look and some do not care." -- a sad truth. Thank you for this reminder, Paula. Blessings.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/11/2024 12:52:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing, Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, sad truth... I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 4/10/2024 1:31:00 PM
I Saw God But Now What ~ Date Written: 4/10/2024
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