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The sewing machine, idle, gathered dust, so long forgotten in grandma's attic; oh, sad it is just going to rust. Can still hear grandma's voice so dramatic, best storyteller in my family! I wandered, with a candle, touching things . . . (Grandpa's love letters - My Dear Amalie) and on this girl's finger her wedding rings. The war years seemed like only yesterday, when grandma was telling me that story; because, of her, I found my destiny . . . storytelling is also my glory; I would watch her face to learn the right spark. "Read your eulogy, Gran, hope you were proud, I remembered- stand tall with a voice loud." (The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark.) _____________________________ April 14, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/"I Remembered" Copyright Protected, ID 18-1013-024-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, One, Nine, and Sixteen sponsor, Viv Wigley Sixth Place

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Date: 5/2/2018 9:29:00 PM
Yes! Dear Constance...story telling is your glory. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:43:00 PM
Great writing Constance. I enjoyed it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:31:00 PM
Beautifully penned with your trademark sad style, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this beautiful poem. Well done!
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:18:00 AM
Beautiful, BW. Congrats.
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Date: 4/20/2018 10:03:00 PM
Broken wings...Ccnstance...who ever you are...this is lovely and meaningful. Some of us wish had attic to discover a past never knew. bbn
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Date: 4/15/2018 7:10:00 AM
A beautiful story, Constance, so many memories to be found when going through an old attic. This is a winner in my books. John
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