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''I Remembered''

The sewing machine, idle, gathered dust,
   so long forgotten in grandma's attic;
      oh, sad it is just going to rust.
Can still hear grandma's voice so dramatic,
                    best storyteller in my family!
I wandered, with a candle, touching things . . . 
        (Grandpa's love letters - My Dear Amalie)
and on this girl's finger her wedding rings.
      The war years seemed like only yesterday,
   when grandma was telling me that story;
because, of her, I found my destiny . . . 
                    storytelling is also my glory;
I would watch her face to learn the right spark.
       "Read your eulogy, Gran, hope you were proud,
I remembered-  stand tall with a voice loud."
          (The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark.)

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April 14, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/"I Remembered"
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1013-024-01
All Rights Reserved.   Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, One, Nine, and Sixteen
sponsor, Viv Wigley

Sixth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George   Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Yes! Dear Constance...story telling is your glory. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Great writing Constance. I enjoyed it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Beautifully penned with your trademark sad style, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this beautiful poem. Well done!
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Beautiful, BW. Congrats.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Broken wings...Ccnstance...who ever you are...this is lovely and meaningful. Some of us wish had attic to discover a past never knew. bbn
Gondolf Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 7:10 AM
A beautiful story, Constance, so many memories to be found when going through an old attic. This is a winner in my books. John
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