I Remember.

The antique paint chipped thermometer would not give up it's cache of mercury from it's 
frosted bulb even in the blinding brightness of the sun on the iced landscape.
    I remember peering  through ice daggers and translucent unicorn crystal horns hanging 
from the eaves outside the picture window of my Vermont country home which commanded 
a view of the valley below. My breath formed a vapor mist on the glass as I strained to look 
down to the blurred pine tree reflections imbedded in the black ice driveway. The long drive 
coarsed an impassable mirrored arc down to the ice covered dirt road at it's end.
    That narrow road dropped rapidly from our drive and snaked into the valley. It was lined 
on one side with numerous trees, but on this day they were transformed into a sunny iced 
extravagansa of porcelain barked Maple trunks supporting heavily drooped crystaline mazes 
of branches and sparkling blown glass twigs.
    I remember walking through my breath and the only sound was the crunching of my 
boots through the frozen crust surface of the polished platinum field. The two houses in the 
valley below were releasing thin straight lines of undisturbed smoke which were calmly 
claimed by the azure skies.
    I remember stopping to watch with bated breath the spectacle of the sunshine crashing 
into thousands of icy tinkling twigs; swirling colors flashing around in an island of tall white 
Birch ice sculptures directly in front of me. The streaked paper bark was frozen into razor 
feathers and rustic belle petals protruding from glassed tiffany trunks.   CRACK!!! The sound 
of an overloaded tree giving way under the weight of it's new load of glitter. Then I 
remember ...consciously breathing again through the frozen vapor ice collected on my 
mustache and beard, thinking a thanksgiving prayer, while I slowly crunched back to my 
home with an arm load of firewood.





inspired by Laura McKenzie's
Winter Adornement contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/25/2010 6:40:00 PM
Dear Robert, This time of Year I live this POEM everyday Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in the Contest Do YOU still have a beard, living in Florida I have mine I live at the top of Mt Moosalak on the Vermont side about 55 miles from Southeast of Williamstown Have YOU ever skied Killington?? We may have seen each other on the trails ALWAYS YOUR POETRY Friend...HG
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Date: 1/24/2010 5:27:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS Robert on your win! This is a lovely narrative and visual!! Great work! Best Wishes Jeralynn
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:20:00 PM
with every scentance you painted a picture for me. i felt as if i were staring out of the very same window watching my breath fog the glass. a great example of how words are just as effective as an artists brush, and truly your an artist with words. thanks for the great read. -joe
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Date: 1/17/2010 1:36:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem in Laura's contest Robert.. I am playing catch up on my commenting since my Jury Duty has taken up two weeks of my life thus far.. so will be back soon once trial is over.. enjoyed this piece ... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/15/2010 4:00:00 PM
Great stuff, Robert!...Being from the south I don't get to see too many scenes like you described - Congratulations! - Tim
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your honourable mention in the Winter Adornment contest.
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Date: 1/14/2010 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations Robert, on your success in Laura McKenzie’s “Winter’s Adornment ” contest with your lovely narrative poem. It's easy to see why you are in the winner’s circle. Your poetic skills excel. (Books are in the mail...Thank you.) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:05:00 PM
Very descriptive of a cold winter day. Being raised in North Dakota I have seen my share. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/11/2010 10:34:00 AM
Robert, many congratulations on your placing in Laura's fine contest >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest Robert. Thank you for your kind comment. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2010 12:37:00 AM
Congrats on your succeses in the recent contest Robert.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:30:00 PM
The two houses in the valley below were releasing thin straight lines of undisturbed smoke which were calmly claimed by the azure skies. This just one of the many lines to love inside your story, Robert. congratulations on your win, and what a great ending this one had! andrea
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Date: 1/10/2010 9:49:00 PM
Hi Robert. Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest. I knew this was a winner the first time I read it. Thank you for sharing your amaing talent yet again. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/10/2010 4:52:00 PM
I knew this would be a winning poem when I first read it!! Congratulations....I hope you will continue this story that takes place in Vermont! :) Thanks for your support, as well! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:21:00 PM
I can see every picture in your words Robert! Congradulations on your win! Beautiful adornment in VT in winter!!! LoveJeralynn
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:01:00 PM
Captivating description of the wood-gathering endeavor, Robert! You have a gift for creating compelling images and sustaining the reader's interest as you tell your story. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/9/2010 9:57:00 AM
Just wonderful Robert, beautiful verse >> James
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Date: 1/8/2010 10:04:00 PM
A very beautiful description of that scenery and how your perceived it. Excellent work of the pen, Robert. Good luck on the contest. About my poem, "Déjà vu", yes, it is a true story. Thanks for reading my poems and for the nice comments. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/6/2010 9:00:00 AM
A marvelous New England landscape (I guess Vermont is 'New England'..I'm from Michigan, you know. We aint too good on gografee) I'm enjoying your poetry more and more, and more often. I so envy your desciptive powers. how's the "stubble?" Love, daver
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Date: 1/5/2010 5:39:00 AM
What a beautiful, breath-taking picture you have painted here, Robert. I hope you have entered it in The Winter Adornment Contest. Lainie
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Date: 1/4/2010 2:36:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Robert! Great job! Peace, Audrey P.S. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/4/2010 8:50:00 AM
Hello again Robert, A very descriptive poem and I felt as though I was inside of it. I am getting chills from reading your writings. A very good poem, Your Friend, Robert. :)
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Date: 1/4/2010 4:36:00 AM
nicely penned, descriptive poem, yes I feel like I am there, hearing the poping branches. I have heard them before. Not often In GA. We had the firewood chore growing up, I didnot like it. LOL
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:28:00 PM
I think you could write a novel without a doubt. I want more! BG
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:50:00 AM
This is so wonderful, Robert. I feel as if I am beginning the first chapter of classic masterpiece, a novel that I don't want to end. The descriptions are amazing, you take the reader with you. Perhaps there is a book that should be written....please take us on that journey with you! Lovely work! ~ Carrie
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