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I Never Got

I never got to be with you or grow with you like sweethearts do, just you and me. . . but C'est la Vie! We had our brief sweet chemistry; no chance to see what would ensue. I never knew you through and through. We never chose that avenue. And so you are the fantasy I never got. And since I never could accrue shared times with you, I have no clue how we’d have been. No history is there to mar my memory, and so it always will be you I never got! (Entry in Matt Caliri's I Love You Because . . .)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/12/2012 3:34:00 PM
this is interesting Andrea, i'd like to know more, a well written poem....
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:18:00 AM
Excellent stuff!I think this is one of the toughest form of English poetry-kashinath (Goes to my Favs)
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Date: 3/10/2010 6:57:00 AM
A lovely poem, In a way I still feel the same way about my husband. Enjoyed reading this morning...
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Date: 1/28/2010 8:03:00 AM
Ahh, I think one can relate to this quite easily--that nagging feeling of "what if"--all the more made challenging since it's about love--you sure are on a roll, Andrea--this is going to my faves--haha I am such a "what if" kind of girl sometimes...you rose to Matt's challenge so well with this piece, I'm sure it will do wonderfully :) super enjoyed this piece...:)
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:32:00 AM
Incredible Rondeau, Andrea. I don't need to wish you good luck in matt's contest. Love, lainie
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:04:00 PM
Excellent write that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/25/2010 2:10:00 PM
Lovely poem for entry into Matt's contest, good luck Andrea >> James
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Date: 1/25/2010 12:17:00 PM
star-crossed lovers. they didn't have a chance to be together, like their fate should have been.sad. i love this. -Always Lynette
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Date: 1/25/2010 2:18:00 AM
This is a nice and imaginative entry for Matt's contest, Andrea. You write so well. (Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. Your comments were all well received by two.) Good luck in the contest. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/24/2010 5:41:00 PM
Andrea, Form writing seems to flow so smoothly from you. I enjoyed your fantasy Rondeau. Best of luck in the contest. Mahalo for your comments on my poems too. Love, Connie
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Date: 1/24/2010 5:05:00 PM
Great entry Andrea, this is what some of William Snograss' poetry resembled, the over tones that is to say. james
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Date: 1/24/2010 3:16:00 PM
Great entry for Matt's "I Love You Because" Contest! I wish you good luck, dear. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:54:00 PM
Thank you,hope you enjoy some of my older poems.I wish you well in this contest.I am working on some new poems but they have to come to me.Take care.
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:44:00 PM
Best of luck for your entry in the contest, Andrea! Best is always a mixture of fantasy and reality. Thank you for yor comment on "Black Cat"! Also in Germany a black cat stands for bad luck. But I had a black cat and my former neighbor's cat was black, for me a black cat is a symbol of luck. Love, Gert
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:34:00 PM
Maybe the best man is the fantasy man... no flaws.. lol... I like your poem very much.. best of luck in the contest...
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