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I Love You, Baby

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I will never forget the first time I saw you, you looked right at me with those eyes of blue; and I knew at that moment you were the one, when you said hello I knew- no other would do. We like to drink coffee in cafes head to head, you whisper- you are sexy with those lips of red; later, we snuggle so nice and close on the sofa, on days like this our love is so deep- but unsaid. We love to stroll hand in hand around the park, and on a bench you open your book to a bookmark; and read to me with your deep, beautiful voice, oh lovely- then I am distracted by a sweet skylark. At night, in our bed you stroke my hair so gently, ear to my tummy you say- I love you, baby; this journey of love has been a delight darling, with all your sweet nothings and words of beauty. ___________________________ November 14, 2017 Poetry/Rubaiyat/I Love You, Baby Copyright Protected, ID 17-1009-715-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Love Poem sponsor, Heidi Sands Sixth Place

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Date: 4/12/2018 12:02:00 AM
Beautifully enchanting, BW. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 4/9/2018 1:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with such a beautifully flowing verse.
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Date: 4/7/2018 2:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem of love!
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Date: 4/5/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest BW. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 4/2/2018 6:45:00 PM
Absolutely beautuful, a definite dream come true. Much luck in the contest
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Date: 4/2/2018 6:24:00 PM
What a dream! Lovely reading.
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