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I Do not Believe in Mermaids

Summer would soon be over
I thought wryly as I walked 
Along the beach, bare-footed,
Admiring the beauty of the sun setting
Behind the far away mountains.

She emerged from the sea, all wet,
And hid behind a large rock.
I meant her no harm as I smiled at her.
Soon we were engaged in a conversation,
Mainly complaining that we had a poor catch.
The smell of fish did not bother me, 
I was a fisherman, after all, not a great one.

It became a habit for us to meet at sunset,
 And I learned much from her about the sea.
The work of a fisherman is not easy
And I always had to leave her for my work
When midnight beckoned as the bells rang.

Autumn was still mild and I invited her
For a lunch lest storms would arrive.
She agreed strangely for she made it clear
She was accustomed only to her type of food.

One day I saw her turn pale and asked what was wrong.
She needed a bath she said.  I showed her the place
And left her in peace.  She spent two hours in a tub.
So I was curious and managed to take a peep.
There in the tub was a beautiful mermaid, tail and all.

I staggered to my kitchen, not knowing what to do.
I need not have worried as she had seen me in the tub.
Suddenly I heard her leave my miserable house.
Every night, rain or shine, I would search for her.
She never appeared again.  I shrugged my shoulders.
After all mermaids, lovely or not, did not exist.
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Allison Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 7:33 AM
you weave such a wonderful magical tale Victor, thanks for sharing your talent here with us on soup:-) hugs jan xx
Lawrence Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 10:48 PM
I was captured by your immersive tale dear Victor, especially the time the two of them spent at sunset discussing fishing ! Your creative mind is in full swing in this charming poem . I hope you are feeling better . I have missed your poetry . Hugs, Susan :)
George Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:39 PM
Hahaha. Even seeing now isn't believing? The conversation you had with her should stir up your mind. Maybe something happened and she had to leave. Lovely piece Dear friend. I really do believe they exist.
Hind Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 6:24 PM
Hmmm, interesting... I don't know how I would respond, lol
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Such an unusual story, Victor. I love how you ended by saying you did'nt believe in her. hmmm, maybe an invisible friend?
Empress Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 10:59 AM
This is such a captivating tale dear victor! So well written and delivered. Iv heard real stories like this from some and its strange, but not about mermaids really. I love mermaids although mermaids never existed. And thats a gorgeous picture to go with this poem! I love how descriptive your write is! Pleasure reading this. Sending you always light
Greenhough Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 9:20 AM
This is an imagination catching poem. I liked it very much. But a tip: You might want to throw a little salt into the mermaid's bath
Williams Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 6:18 AM
I was mesmerised from beginning to end with this fishy tale. Just kidding it was truly enjoyable dear Victor . Though I was a bit disappointed you didn't get to see her again. Maybe she'll come back one day for a visit...Hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 5:31 AM
The human within negotiates our abilities conceptualizing consciousness that's manifested throughout one's lifetime--free of incidents, and not according to one's age, as a child can stay in a matured body that's confirmed via tests and trials. Being that said, exist in midst of equal measure, those who op's to lean in favor of a choice that benefits hidden goals. Aloha William
Daniel Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Wonderful story, Victor!
Kitchin Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 2:56 AM
Victor, a wonderful story, mermaids may exist.
George Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:26 PM
Your imagination is so alive dear Victor. Your story telling ability is so evident in most of your poems. Though mermaids do not exist, it is a joy reading about them. Enjoyed your poem.
Rolland Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 7:02 PM
so lovely poem Victor, i am not sure they do'nt exist, just imagine they can thanks for the uplifting poetry
Buehler Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Love does sometimes slip through the fingers (or back into the sea). I enjoyed this a lot, Victor. :)
Roper Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 2:27 PM
Beautiful story, she could only coup with so much of human life. Back to the sea she was called. Blessings my friend
One Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Great writing and a truthful ending..
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:17 AM
Victor, this is a lovely story. You never know, after all, the depths of the oceans hide many mysteries. This reminds me a film of Tom Hanks, when he falls in love with one of them. It would be nice to read a second part of this great story. Well penned, my dear friend.
Manassian Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:16 AM
Intriguing write. So... she's seen you in the tub as well? Seems things had progressed nicely till the discovery. Goes well with the photo. Thanks for the visit today.
Rose  Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Or do they ? I'm not so sure they don't Victor, just cuz we don't see them, doesn't mean they are not real, I love your story poem, made me smile, maybe the next time she wants you close she will sing for you, and then, " you won't stand a chance" you will believe
Edmonds  Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 6:42 AM
A fishy tale and a mesmerising read Victor. Who knows if mermaids exist for real, one day the truth will be revealed… Blessings, Beryl
DiMino Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 6:35 AM
"After all mermaids, lovely or not, did not exist." But it is nice to imagine that they do...what the heck. Enjoyed your tale very much my friend. An admirable fish story. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Where your imagination goes…fun for a time, then poof the vision disappears. Hugs ~ Kim
May Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 3:06 AM
You got an enchanting catch, I enjoyed your mermaid story
Jones Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 2:35 AM
An engaging story! Enjoyed
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