I Died

Decked in floral wreaths n’ crown, As I lay in state among family and friends, I knew my life, beyond mortal reach, extends, And no reason for me to sigh or frown. I felt very light and glided through lands forlorn, Where lamps shone bright in radiant sheen. Fluffy clouds moved past star-studded sky, a lovely scene. Though out of mortal reach, no reason to mourn. Reaching a land of mystery where all seemed so blest, I saw God with saints and seraphs in all glory reign, Also, angels singing songs of praise in great zest. I saw my family grieving deep as if they did attest, That my life was dear to them and that I didn’t live in vain. Contented and happy, thus I enter my place of joyful rest. April.28.2023 I Died Poetry Contest Sponsor- Craig Cornish

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/1/2023 4:09:00 PM

This is a beautiful sonnet about the promise of a reward in paradise and a live well lived, best of luck with the contest~

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/28/2023 11:27:00 AM

Amazing poetry, Valsa. Your poem is full of useful guidance and profound thoughts. A warm welcome, though, can weather any grief. You took us to the world of heavens to a place of Utopia where everything should be a blessing. Wish you a happy long life and good luck with the contest.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/28/2023 8:44:00 AM

I love reading these poems about what people imagine the next life will bring. A pleasure to read, Valsa. Whatever we think heaven will be, multiply that by the number of stars and we might get close:) Have a wonderful weekend.

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/28/2023 7:26:00 AM

Amen, my friend this is the land of rest and peace without wickedness, we die to this world that we might live in His presence now in peace among the wickedness.. Therefore we do not lose heart. Though outwardly we are wasting away, yet inwardly we are being renewed day by day. 2 Corinthians 4:16 NIV

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2023 5:39:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. A hard subject upon which to write if using the theme of one's own true death. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/28/2023 5:31:00 AM

You take us to the world beyond--reaching a land of mystery where all is blest--as you so well say. Splendidly delivered, Valsa. Best to you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/28/2023 2:43:00 AM

You captured it well Valsa, it's part of our journey and is nothing to be feared. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/28/2023 1:06:00 AM

Great description of after death experience, Valsa:)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/28/2023 12:12:00 AM

You made dying sound almost joyful Valsa. Not many can do that suddessfully. Beautifully written. So well done

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/27/2023 11:23:00 PM

I too have such a dead wish. His will be done.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/27/2023 9:34:00 PM

Hi Valsa, You covered such a difficult topic very well. Top notch content and imagery. I think you rose to the challenge. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis