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I Die

It felt as though I could not breathe a breath. My arms and legs were made of heavy stone. I could not move as though no flesh or bone and I was primed and waiting for my death. His fiery eyes caught me in thoughtful gaze. He stood his deadly scythe upon the ground. This specter took a somber look around, then settled eyes to rest on mine in craze. The hooded figure motioned it was time that I should attest my final goodbye and meet impending death with calm sublime. I leave this earthly place a paradigm. Amid glad tear and heavy sigh I die as tolling bells begin to sound their chime.

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K. Parker

Date: 5/14/2023 9:34:00 PM

Long as an individual know the facts of dying with a deep deep acceptance and understanding, the fear of death leaves him. We are born from a quiet sleep and die to a calming awakening. Amazing poem!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 6:57:00 AM

Your are kind with your praise K. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/4/2023 10:15:00 AM

Linda, congratulations on your win. Your words ring with impact. Your images bring to life your words with vivid realism. Wonderfully done. Blessings.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/4/2023 12:08:00 PM

Hello dear Sam. Thank you for your supportive and encouraging words. Your visits warm my heart and pen. :)

Mark Massey

Date: 5/3/2023 1:16:00 PM

Well done Linda, this was a tough form and you produced an outstanding sonnet. Congrats on the placement. Craig is an outstanding judge and a gifted writer. His opinion of your work is proof that this piece was well written.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/3/2023 7:52:00 PM

Thank you Mark. I take that as high praise indeed. Thank you so much for your thoughtful and encouraging comments. :)

W J Clarke

Date: 5/3/2023 3:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Linda. Great gripping imagery flows through your well penned creation:-)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/3/2023 7:18:00 AM

Thank you WJ. Always a pleasure to have you visit with supportive comments. :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/2/2023 7:15:00 PM

Very vivid on the stark imagery of death, and it made me think of 'For Whom the Bell Tolls' - congratulations on your win~

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/3/2023 7:17:00 AM

Thank you for the kind words and congrats Michelle. I appreciate your visit and support! :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/2/2023 6:43:00 PM

Glad to see this on the winner's list, Linda, congratulations:)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/3/2023 7:15:00 AM

Hi Jo. Thanks for the continued support! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/2/2023 10:46:00 AM

Dear Linda, the vivid, potent imagery of your exceptional sonnet brings me easily into the intimate scene of the narrator's final moments as their life succumbs to death. Splendid and stirring! Congratulations for your excellent placement in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/3/2023 7:14:00 AM

Your words are kind and supportive, as always, Susan. I appreciate your encouragement. Thank you! :)

Valsa George

Date: 4/8/2023 10:44:00 PM

I wonder how we all will feel when passing through that critical hour ! Powerful delineation of the last moments of one's life. All the best dear Linda !

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/9/2023 10:32:00 AM

Hi Valsa. I cannot say, but I envision it many ways, depending on my mood at the time. Perhaps that is how it is - the mood you have when you die. :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/7/2023 10:18:00 PM

I beleive the fear or anticipation of death is The hardest part for anyone saved..? The Door to life is not easily noticed or described As such now.' Great write for any contest as I Read it.'

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/8/2023 7:10:00 AM

Hey Joe. Good to see you! I like the way you read this. Thank you. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/7/2023 8:26:00 PM

Nicely done, Linda:)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/8/2023 7:08:00 AM

Hi my friend. Thank you Jo. :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/7/2023 1:47:00 PM

Brave lady, Excellent poem, good luck in the competition Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/7/2023 3:41:00 PM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts Svvie, and for your wishes in the competition. :)