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I Can, But Should I

I cried on a pale tree within my reach Anguish flowed with a life lesson to teach Though not a swinger Here is the zinger I can truly say I bawled on a beech!

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/26/2018 5:46:00 PM

Giggle, giggle!!

Pat Adams
Date: 3/26/2018 6:53:00 PM

My lucky day. I'm a super fan of giggles!!!......8)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/26/2018 3:46:00 PM

you are too funny, pat! this cracked me up!

Pat Adams
Date: 3/26/2018 6:51:00 PM

Excellent!! Exactly the desired response!!!......p

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/26/2018 3:00:00 PM

- :) ... well done :)

Pat Adams
Date: 3/26/2018 6:50:00 PM

Thank you, and thank for spreading your sunshine as well!!!...............80)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/26/2018 9:34:00 AM

Ahh, makes me sad then happy! btw, like your new avatar photo!

Pat Adams
Date: 3/26/2018 6:49:00 PM

Thank you I like yours as well! I guess we're just two avatar admirers !!..(I've been called worse!).....80)