I Can, But Should I

I cried on a pale tree within my reach
Anguish flowed with a life lesson to teach
Though not a swinger
Here is the zinger
I can truly say I bawled on a beech!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wanter Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Giggle, giggle!!
Adams Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 6:53 PM
My lucky day. I'm a super fan of giggles!!!......8)
Bauer Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 3:46 PM
you are too funny, pat! this cracked me up!
Adams Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Excellent!! Exactly the desired response!!!......p
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 3:00 PM
- :) ... well done :)
Adams Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Thank you, and thank for spreading your sunshine as well!!!...............80)
Faulkner Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Ahh, makes me sad then happy! btw, like your new avatar photo!
Adams Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you I like yours as well! I guess we're just two avatar admirers !!..(I've been called worse!).....80)
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