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Human Vultures

Note: 99% of my poems are fiction. Occasional some are not. This is one of them. Corruption is everywhere. ______________________________________________________________ Of all the lovely birds of the air, The vulture is the one I hate most. But why? Isn’t such a bird God’s creation too? I suppose it’s the ugliness of its appearance, Its bare throat devoid of feathers, Its scavenging on dead animals, Bald, ugly, squabbling and filthy. I simply cannot stand it. There are others like it, alas. The human vultures that roam In search of easy gain. My wife had not been dead three hours, When I returned home feeling awful. There attached to the door of my home Was a card, giving me condolences And informing they were expert undertakers. Did I not need an expert to bury my wife? How they got to know so fast I do not know. But I am head strong in these affairs. I chose another agency, one I could trust. A few days passed and a kindly soul Phoned me up. I am a solicitor, he said. So what! You’ll need the services of one. Thanks, my friend, I have my own. Again the telephone rang and a comely voice Offered my condolences and wished To make an appointment with me, So that we could sell my home. Incredible, I thought. My home is not empty. My wife still roams about bringing me Memories I am loathe to forget. Politely I sent the lady to where she belonged. My home was not for sale. Will I receive more offers? Who knows? I’m beginning to love The flying vultures more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 11/6/2022 7:07:00 PM
Victor, I too had a chuckle at your ending. I cringed while reading this. I had no idea, but it sure rings true. So sad really…condolences to introduce the knife to the chest already suffering a broken heart. Enraging! A Powerful poem indeed! P.s. hope your daughter is doing better. Big hugs! sally
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Date: 10/28/2022 4:58:00 AM
i had a laugh with this poem Victor, unfortunately human vultures abound in our world. Vultures are grotessque creatures and they can smell death and whether human or animal, they circle around this unfortunate person or animal and when the moment comes they merely descend and rip the corpse leaving only clean bones, this takes a short while only, whereas human vultures strip you of money maybe even quicker. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/25/2022 4:32:00 AM
Unfortunately, this piece rings so true, just when one is feeling vulnerable, the last thing needed is to deal with opportunistic vultures..Delice
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Date: 10/25/2022 4:31:00 AM
Unreal! The vultures I suppose were made to be ugly. People make a choice. Who really wants condolences from a business, especially one that wants your money. Death is an ugly business.
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Date: 10/24/2022 1:59:00 PM
The name of the game is to be there first, sell and make a profit. It doesn't make us fall in love with them though does it. I like this one. Very creative way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/24/2022 1:53:00 PM
It has changed me, questioning callers, even customer service gets my 3rd degree. Vultures are born this way, solicitors become this way. Sorry for the homeowners, they are on their lists! Your memories are what matters, Victor!
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:08:00 AM
Powerful write Victor. People can be so calloused sometimes, preying on what they know are vulnerable targets. hugs, Linda
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Date: 10/24/2022 8:12:00 AM
wow, what a great poem, Victor. First describing those hideous birds and then comparing them to the human counterparts of them. the last line makes me wonder if you are ready to leave your home?? I hope you would not feel compelled to have to do that. But I can understand why many single elderly folks end up moving.
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Date: 10/24/2022 8:12:00 AM
Over here, the vultures are Medicare agents, all vying to do your Medicare for you. Scam calls by them are off thee hook
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Date: 10/24/2022 1:15:00 AM
Victor, that was an awful way to treat someone who’d just lost their loved one. We have to be aware there are human vultures everywhere… Belle
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Date: 10/23/2022 6:01:00 AM
Victor, it's amazing how many human vultures come around at times when hearts are broken. This is going into my fav's my friend. As for the vulture birds...not a pretty sight. Have a nice Sunday!
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Date: 10/23/2022 5:26:00 AM
Victor, you never cease to amaze me with your lines. What a pure display of creativity! Best regards, Adeniji. It's been a while.
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Date: 10/22/2022 8:56:00 PM
You write it, Victor, as it is. The generations today are conditioned to the behaviour, you experience my friend. So glad you wrote, going to my favourites right now. Thank you. Harry
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Date: 10/22/2022 4:01:00 PM
lol I feel this one for you Victor, when death comes around there are many opportunists, glad you said no, she is still there with you your dear Lily, :)
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Date: 10/22/2022 1:39:00 PM
"One's death, another's bread." ... like vultures, Victor - hugs
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Date: 10/22/2022 7:26:00 AM
They are out there Victor we just need to be cautious and aware. Lovely poem. Debx
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Date: 10/21/2022 9:19:00 PM
I do concur wih all the sentiments you have expressed here. Yes, vultures are loathsome birds though I love birds in general. The human vultures are more abominable, waiting for the earliest chance to prey upon us. Powerful penning, dear Victor
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Date: 10/21/2022 9:06:00 PM
I like the smoothly efficient way that the shysters were dealt with in this poem-polite, firm and effective. A fine poem, Victor. :)
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Date: 10/21/2022 7:29:00 PM
Human vultures … all around, striking the vulnerable. Great poem, Victor
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Date: 10/21/2022 4:24:00 PM
The worst thing about it is that I have become suspicious. A free gift? In return for what? A kind word? What's the subtext? My rent was just put up by an agent who thought I would be too old to move. Fortunately the owner and I had a conversation. She hadn't agreed at all! Keep fighting, Victor! Elizabeth
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Date: 10/21/2022 3:35:00 PM
We can all relate to the experience you share. A few circling for prey in every society. A point well made, Victor--expertly illustrated with examples.
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Date: 10/21/2022 12:28:00 PM
Vultures, are pretty on their own. We have so many around here. Yes, there are human vultures. Great verse. Blessing and hugs my friend
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