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How Do You Feel

all the tiny pieces of life blended together  when I met you at amber sunset,  gossamer light of the melting rays fell on us…beside a dock, with weathered grey planks,  I looked at you,  eyes met, words paused, How did you feel?  you gazed at me… after so many years of cruel separation,  eyes locked, our hearts battled with untold  emotions,  I remembered all the fragrance and fragments of our life,  which I was never able to piece together,  always felt like unsolved puzzles!  I wished for the soothing raindrops which once drizzled us like blessings,  yearned for the dreamy azure clouds floating above us,  when golden saffron-scented flower-petals sprawled on the ground....  I feel I am back to where we started,  How do you feel?  January 26, 2023 Inspired By " How Do You Feel" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose Not Entered In The Contest

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Date: 3/12/2023 10:26:00 PM
After a period of long separation, a sweeping current of emotions must be passing through the mind of each other. Now it is curious to know how each other feels. A beautiful poem, dear Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/13/2023 11:15:00 AM
Yes, Valsa, life creates so many memories of beautiful moments - separation adds intensity to the feelings.
Date: 3/9/2023 10:13:00 AM
Oh, Mala, So very lovely and touching with an air of mystery. If it's true, I hope you both felt the same...
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/13/2023 11:14:00 AM
Life creates so many memories, Ann, hard to forget the beautiful moments!

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