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"The world has many great places to vacation, a hospital is not one of them." By Poet There are times when we go to the hospital by car or by ambulance. One gets hurt or becomes sick, then off we go. We may need rest, but they keep us up all night. We may even need a repair or two, like Frankenstein. A hospital is not a fun place, even the sick will agree to that. Next time you need a vacation, take out a map.

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Date: 7/21/2023 2:06:00 PM
Paula, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge H Words, like your quote too !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2023 1:47:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this "Hospital" write and quote. It was a joy to bring it to life. Thanks for having these contests and for the placement. Have a great day writing away..............
Date: 7/7/2023 4:01:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/7/2023 6:32:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this write. It is always good to see you. Have a great day writing away..............
Date: 7/4/2023 11:07:00 AM
Hi Paula, congratulations on your placement in the contest. I agree - if at all possible avoid hospital admission. Be well. Cheers, Brian
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2023 11:52:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my  Hospital/vacation write. Oh yes, avoid hospitals at all costs. An island is a better place to go. Have a great day writing away..............
Date: 7/4/2023 9:23:00 AM
"2 Place"   Hospital ~ Date Written: 6/30/2023
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Date: 7/4/2023 7:21:00 AM
Paula, heartfelt felicitations on your triumphant contest win with this lovely poem
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2023 11:50:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my fun Hospital/vacation write. Have a great day writing away..............
Date: 7/4/2023 6:10:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Paula :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2023 11:49:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back. Hugs... Have a great day writing away..............
Date: 7/2/2023 9:34:00 PM
So right you are Paula I try and avoid them as possible it is always an experience... God bless you and keep you far away from one...
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2023 11:51:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun Hospital/vacation write. Yes, one must avoid them at all cost. I would like the beach much better. Have a great day writing away..............
Date: 7/2/2023 3:40:00 PM
True.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2023 11:49:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun Hospital/vacation write. Have a great day writing away.......................
Date: 7/2/2023 3:09:00 PM
Hi Paula. I worked in a hospital for 26 years and can safely say I'd never like to holiday there too. The theatres they have there are not the theatres I like to visit on holiday that's for sure. :) Cheers - Gary
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2023 11:49:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Hospital/vacation write. WOW!!! Working 26 years in a hospital. Good for you. I could never do that. Their TV's are much of a theater. Hahah... Have a great day writing away.......................
Date: 7/2/2023 11:27:00 AM
I agree, Paula, a it an't no picnic either. :-) Have a great July, my friend! Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2023 11:45:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun Hospital/vacation write. Have a great day writing away.......................
Date: 7/1/2023 2:12:00 PM
- I certainly wouldn't want to go on holiday in a hospital ... then I would have to be seriously ill, Paula - Love the Frankenstein line :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2023 2:28:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my fun Hospital/vacation write. Also glad you Love my Frankenstein line. A time for some humor. Hugs... (July 4th is our anniversary). Have a great weekend writing away.......................
Date: 7/1/2023 7:27:00 AM
Hospital ~ Date Written: 6/30/2023
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Date: 7/1/2023 4:02:00 AM
Sometimes we end up there against our wish, nice one, Paula:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2023 10:34:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Hospital write. Yes, we do end up there against our wishes. Not a fun place. Have a great weekend writing away..............................
Date: 6/30/2023 10:06:00 PM
I totally agree with you my dear poet friend Paula. If possible, i don't want to step on a hospital or even look at it when I pass by. But sometimes, I couldn't avoid stepping on it. I enjoyed your beautiful and creative poem my dear poet friend. The last line makes me smile. I love it and the quote above. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2023 10:33:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love my write/quote and my last line made you smile. I love to give out smiles. Hugs... Have a great weekend writing away..............................
Date: 6/30/2023 4:05:00 PM
I fell and broke my finger on the morning we were due to travel home - spent 4 hours in the hospital they x rayed it said it was broken didn't even get the gravel out of the cut and sent us on our way. we got the ferry home, went to the local hospital about 10.30 pm they couldnt have been more caring! one thing for sure, holidays and hospitals do not mix Paula. hugs jan xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2023 10:30:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my write. Sorry about your trip/hospital visit. Hope you are OK. Have a great weekend writing away..............................

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