Hoping Constellations

Hoping constellations This warm evening lingers along weeping fence lines of tear drop persuasion laced in glistening spider webs and I am missing you Staring up at a melancholy sky, counting hours on the face of the moon while minute hand comets slowly float by in orbiting arcs getting nowhere fast I see shadows reach beyond pecan grove silhouettes to far away borders of palm leaf pathways and white sand whispers, And I know this is where my heart longs to be as I walk towards the brightest star hoping constellations will guide me to you Good night Soupers
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Petersen Potter Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Very beautiful painted good night love poem Chris!:) I really enjoyed it!.A 7! And a fav too.Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:) D.
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March 28, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind thoughts on my poem. I appreciate your visit today.
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March 4, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Oh how lovely, Chris, and softly poignant! I feel like going out for a walk under the stairs after reading this beautiful poem. :)
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March 6, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Thanks so much Rhonda, I hope you find a beautiful sky waiting for you.
Onclaud Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 2:27 PM
how stars glisten allowing your heart to be with her... ohh, greeat gem of a poem.. huggs
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March 6, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Thank you so very much Nette
Hamilton Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 7:20 AM
I agree Chris you have to publish these poems, my, my, you have a way with words, just loved it!
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March 3, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Thanks so very much John. I appreciate you saying so.
Chircop Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 4:55 AM
I can feel the longing..The heartbeat..ticking on the clock of the moon...The absence...And the dream..of walking on white sands on Palm trees paths with the one..Yes..That is what I visualize..Sad and beautiful at the same time..A favourite...
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March 3, 2017 at 8:57 AM
My sweet friend, thank you so much for always leaving such kind words for me. I am more than thrilled you liked this one tonight/morning. :) Once again, your comments are poetry to me.
Ricci Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 4:00 AM
My goodness Chris. Beyond a 7 is this entry. You and your entry have truly met the emotive element with your words which are so eloquently expressed and placed. What can be said for such an entry simply put beautiful and yes poetic. The quiet reflective tone is very appealing. Well done on all counts.
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March 3, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Thank you so very much Lisa for your kind thoughts on my poem. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. I appreciate all of your visits to my page.
Burch Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 2:16 AM
Utter perfection Chris... :) I'm putting in my request for a personally autographed copy of your book when you publish!!! ;) Big Hugggs. Deb
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March 3, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Ok, I will honor that request if I ever get around to doing something with these poems. :) Thanks so very much Deb for all of your kind thoughts.
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March 3, 2017 at 12:11 AM
Constellations will guide you. Teardrop persuasions in spider webs will light the way. You'll get there. Sleep well, Chris :)
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March 3, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 7:15 PM
OMG. I just saw the person below me also said the word magical. Honestly, I did not see her comment first!!
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March 3, 2017 at 8:53 AM
That's ok, I'll take magical any day of the week. :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 7:15 PM
Ahhhh, magical, Chris. When are you publishing your anthology? you must name it Magical Poetry.
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March 3, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Thank you Andrea so very much, Your nice comments are magic to me. Sorry, I don't have any plans to publish in the future, but you can read them all you like here for free. :)
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March 2, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Your pen is a magical paintbrush. Goodnight!
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March 3, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Thank you so very much Maureen. I appreciate your kindness.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 6:08 PM
Lovely images, Chris!
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March 3, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Thank you so very much Kim.
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