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Honeysuckle Heartbeat

You bloomed in heartbeats of cream daisy, longing to be born like breaths of gold honeysuckle petals, but, when fate smeared silence on twinkling throbs of innocence, life sighed in crisp embers of faith as your feet basked in peace above earth. Weaving shine with a pearly smile, you swirled in a snow-white lily's soul when heaven melted in moonstruck sight; I'll miss you, beyond love, my flower.

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Date: 12/22/2023 9:30:00 AM
I really love the opening, great use of metaphors. "Feet basked in peace above earth" pieces like this shows how calm and beautiful love is, it's boundless.
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Date: 12/21/2023 1:15:00 PM
I knew this one would finish at the top..Congratulations on your win in the contest..
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Date: 12/21/2023 4:41:00 AM
Dear Hiya, ah this is such a touching and evocative nonet that flows with beautiful metaphors and descriptive diction. I love how you’ve written this, and i felt so much especially as i read “ longing to be born like breaths of gold honeysuckle petals“ that made me feel so much and also “ life sighed in crisp embers of faith” sigh! Made me sad. Sometimes some are meant to be angels, above the cruelty on this earth, for me this nonet depicts loss but also shows love and loss. Congratulations
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Date: 12/21/2023 3:31:00 AM
What a beautiful bereavement poem. The energy is so loving and longing yet transcending love that is eternal. Love this! I missed this as potd! Congratulations.
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Date: 12/21/2023 3:19:00 AM
- A lovely poem, congratulations on the p.o.t.d., Hiya :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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Date: 12/20/2023 1:44:00 PM
Hiya, a lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings
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Date: 12/20/2023 1:32:00 PM
such beautiful analogies, Hiya. Sounds like somebody is now an angel in heaven
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Date: 12/20/2023 10:41:00 AM
So poignantly sad, Hiya, with your signature images like "cream daisy," "fate smeared silence," "heaven melted in moonstruck sight." This is grief mixed with a tender farewell so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your POTD. Sending you blessings of comfort.
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Date: 12/20/2023 10:09:00 AM
So poignantly sad, Hiya, with your signature images like "cream daisy," "fate smeared silence," "heaven melted in moonstruck sight." This is grief mixed with a tender farewell so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your POTD. Sending you blessings of comfort.
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Date: 12/20/2023 5:39:00 AM
Lovely write, Sharma! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/19/2023 11:44:00 PM
A very touching and emtional write Hiya, congratulations on poem of the day
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Date: 12/19/2023 8:15:00 PM
An exquisitely beautiful poem, Hiya. It is in my favorites. Congratulations on POTD. Blessings <3
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Date: 12/19/2023 7:05:00 PM
Dear Hiya, life is found in blooming heartbeats. Which is beautiful in every way. Until, "smeared silence," leaves an emptiness inside. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Moments and memories remain, of those gone on before us. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/19/2023 6:37:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on POTD :)
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Date: 12/19/2023 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Hiya. I thought it might be chosen when I read it the first time. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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Date: 12/19/2023 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Hiya! Your Nonet is such a delight to read - every word is soothing, touching, mesmerizing - unique poetry created with love!
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Date: 12/19/2023 12:13:00 PM
Oh, such a beautiful poem, Hiya. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 12/19/2023 10:29:00 AM
Ahhh, so wonderfully vibrant Hiya. A double sweetness. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 12/19/2023 10:06:00 AM
Hiya, a double nonet, metaphors brilliantly used. As usual you're a delight to read on POTD! Congratulations to you! Love the new avatar;) Blessings ~Anaya
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Date: 12/19/2023 9:44:00 AM
Back with hearty Congratulations on a well-deserved POTD, dear Hita. Enjoy this great honor
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Date: 12/19/2023 8:52:00 AM
Yay Hiya….lovely poem and lovely recipient of POTD!! Congratulations my friend! Debx
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Date: 12/19/2023 7:58:00 AM
Wonderful write, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/19/2023 5:29:00 AM
returning to extend my heartiest congratulations on your poem being selected as POTD. It's more beautiful today than it was the first time I read it.
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Date: 12/19/2023 5:22:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Hiya. Enjoy your special day today.
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Date: 12/19/2023 4:55:00 AM
Back to say enjoy your day dear Hiya
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