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Home- a Happy Haven

Home should be made a place of love A stable shelter from all storms of life Within the walls of a happy home, I avow, There will be no room for spite or strife Where all live in the spirit of peace as dove A place to turn to when heavy with care The love received there is balm to every scar An abode to which, after tedious toil, we happily retire A simple dwelling with not even a palace, on par Where, in joys and sorrows, all have an equal share. A home is more than a roof above our head But a haven where all dissensions disappear Where each one is bound by love’s thread And the river of life runs smooth and clear Where God is revered, and prayers are said October.16.2022 Your Choice Again Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand Three Stanza Poem in Quintain (Sicilian) Sponsor- L. Milton Hankins
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Date: 10/26/2022 6:48:00 AM
Amen , no one can really understand love untill the presence of God is within , then the love flows in abundance no matter where you are, love ya
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Date: 10/20/2022 6:05:00 PM
I feel like that place is right here and right now, reading your post. Valsa, “Home is where love resides, memories are created, friends always belong, and laughter never ends.”
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Date: 10/18/2022 3:57:00 PM
I agree with your thoughts on a home, my friend. Hope your poem does well in the contest. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 10/18/2022 3:46:00 PM
Yes, a home is more than a roof or walls, it is the sanctuary from the rush of life, hope this is a winner for you~
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Date: 10/17/2022 12:44:00 AM
A real pleasure to read these soothing words, Valsa, so eloquently crafted
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Date: 10/16/2022 6:35:00 PM
Home is a place of comfort and so are your words Valsa a pleasure to read. God bless you Dear...
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Date: 10/16/2022 11:56:00 AM
Home is where your heart is, I love to travel and see other places but always look forward to coming home. Hope you've had a lovely weekend Valsa. Tom
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Date: 10/16/2022 7:34:00 AM
Valsa, The tranquil and beautiful tone of your piece was something I truly enjoyed. You offer wise advice for married people and their families throughout this piece of writing.
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Date: 10/16/2022 6:12:00 AM
Enjoyed the peaceful, heavenly tenor of your poem, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 10/16/2022 4:43:00 AM
Good advice for couples and families in this work of yours. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sometimes other members of the family are not of the same mindset as the one trying to have that place of peace. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Your visits add a great dimension to my page. Sara
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