Notes About The Poem

Written on January 16, 2024

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Holes

I have holes in me,
Where elated moments once blurred
The reality and the dream,
The winds and the seas,
The joy and the grief.

I have holes in me,
Where colors can bleed
Scarlet and cobalt,
Violet becomes my destiny,
While truth reaches beneath the weeds,
Planting seeds of dandelion dreams.

I have holes in me,
Where robins speak,
Betraying my need,
Listening like the stars
Who see through my façade,
Into the blossoming melancholy.

I have holes in me,
Where darkness rises,
Dancing with the oaks and pines,
Risking every doubt, each fear,
With milky laughter,
Captivating even the night’s heart.

I have holes in me,
Where silence offends 
Disturbing the peace of friends,
Who want to kiss away my fragile wings,
With their well-meaning gifts,
Their blessings ache to believe…
Because they gave, I have changed –
The holes have been stuffed with light,
Glistening shards of hope

My holes, jammed together,
By generous souls who once thought –
My holes could be mended,
And, they let the light in, lingering
To watch – as those holes continued
To bring my life’s breathe.

My holes – could it possibly be,
Those holes – they’re the lessons,
The faith and the freedom,
The messages of a life lived better,
Because my holes – just holes,
Hold me all together!
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January 16, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Excellent analogy Gina.. WE all have holes in us, some are good at not letting everything leak out, some not so.. its all about how we keep these holes from ruining us.. nicely done..
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January 16, 2024 at 6:52 AM
Gina, you always give such thoughtful purpose in your lines, and never forget Who we should thank.
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