History In the Making

Do you remember, dear, we were young
It was dusk and we’d gone horseback riding
Stopped to sip riesling wine
Nibble grapes and cheese

With much passion you unfurled your intentions
Detailed how you saw the future together
Getting married, building a house
And then maybe children to call our own

You asked me to consider it
I said there was nothing to think about
So it was that with a kiss we sealed the deal 
There was no greater honour in my heart

And on the outside I know I glowed
For we both knew we were creating history


AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on March 3, 2018 for contest EIGHT-WORD CHALLENGE sponsored by ROBERT HAIGH  -  RANKED 9TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/15/2018 9:32:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Line , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Date: 3/15/2018 7:44:00 PM
A beautiful, romantic poem, Line. Very well-written using the required words too. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/15/2018 8:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/14/2018 11:53:00 PM
Lovely write! Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Line - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-) <3
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Date: 3/15/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gregory. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/14/2018 9:15:00 PM
Hope your story is still unfolding, Line. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 3/14/2018 10:13:00 PM
LOL. Thanks for your visit and comment. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/3/2018 12:51:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet,Line. Ah, young love...you've captured it well!!
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:35:00 AM
Thanks, Larry. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/2/2018 10:30:00 PM
Lovely sonnet, Line! Janice
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Date: 3/2/2018 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/2/2018 9:06:00 PM
Line, beautiful sentimentality in this one. I especially like the ending. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/2/2018 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Janece. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/2/2018 8:11:00 PM
You glowed inside and out because you were in love. Excellent use of the prompt words. Best of luck in the contest, Line.
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Date: 3/2/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Reason.
Date: 3/2/2018 7:32:00 PM
The wrap up at the end — we were creating history! Lovely poem though and through!
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Date: 3/2/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated visit and comment.
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