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Triolet Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman
Written on July 30, 2023

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His Silent Embrace

mist rises across the mountain’s wrinkles painting the hills in His silent embrace rain, His blessing, gently falls in sprinkles mist rises across the mountain's wrinkles laughing, singing, glistening with twinkles pausing to pray for His abiding grace mist rises across the mountain's wrinkles painting the hills in His silent embrace
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Fowler Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Ahh dear Gina. This is so full of great imagery - congratulations! :)
Slaughter Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Very beautiful, Regina. Love the pic, too. And congrats on this piece's placement in the contest.
Merryman Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 6:53 PM
Gina, exquisite imagery and natural flow of lines. Your words touched my heart! I see this earned POD also, so congrats on POD and 1st place in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
Tor Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Regina this is awesome. Congratulations on receiving a deserving Honor of POTD.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 11:05 AM
A beautiful Triolet Regina, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 6:16 AM
Congratulations on your receiving POTD, Dear Gina, with this uplifting poem. Your poems always render a beautiful feeling of faith and devotion. Blessings ~ Mala
Nicole Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 6:58 PM
Regina, you paint such a beautiful picture with your words. Our creator created the wrinkles on those mountains, and those that form, when we smile. :) Your thoughts uplift and inspire, my sweet friend. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lindley Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 4:21 PM
A truly brilliant poem that ever so richly deserves its POTD award my good friend. A fav..... God bless,.
Anaya Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 11:22 AM
A troilet and a monorhyme in one, such uplifting poetry as usual. Congratulations on the POTD Gina McIntosh! xhugs
Kauffman Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Dear Gina, congratulations on your POTD honor! Love "mountain wrinkles!" Such wonderful and innovative imagery! Your words reach right into the heart with a smile of joy for such beauty! Blessings and hugs dear friend!
May Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Congrats on POTD Gina, Lovely write
Kitchin Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Gina, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD!
Baker Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Excellent form in your Triolet, Gina. Your message is soothing and comforting. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Goyal Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 7:57 AM
Beautiful poem, congrats on POTD :-) -AG
Canerdy Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Gina, this is an excellent triolet that richly deserves the title POTD. Janice
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 6:05 AM
- Oh... so beautiful, Gina :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD :)
Jones Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 5:29 AM
Lovely. Congrats on potd!
Ibeh Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 5:05 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your POTD kudos, Gina!:-)
Gentile Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Gina, congratulations on your POTD honors!!!!
Pandit Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 4:40 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Gina. Enjoy your special day, today.
Meadows Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 4:22 AM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTD.
M  Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Beautiful poem Regina! Congratulations on POTD! Debx
Lane Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 2:30 AM
Congratulations on your faithful write, Gina. Describing the clefts of mountains as wrinkles was a wise choice of words.
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 12:50 AM
an absolutely beautiful triolet Regina, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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