His Silent Embrace

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Triolet Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman
Written on July 30, 2023

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mist rises across the mountain’s wrinkles painting the hills in His silent embrace rain, His blessing, gently falls in sprinkles mist rises across the mountain's wrinkles laughing, singing, glistening with twinkles pausing to pray for His abiding grace mist rises across the mountain's wrinkles painting the hills in His silent embrace

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Date: 8/10/2023 11:55:00 AM
Ahh dear Gina. This is so full of great imagery - congratulations! :)
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Date: 8/8/2023 10:47:00 AM
Very beautiful, Regina. Love the pic, too. And congrats on this piece's placement in the contest.
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Date: 8/7/2023 6:53:00 PM
Gina, exquisite imagery and natural flow of lines. Your words touched my heart! I see this earned POD also, so congrats on POD and 1st place in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/4/2023 12:17:00 PM
Regina this is awesome. Congratulations on receiving a deserving Honor of POTD.
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Date: 8/2/2023 11:05:00 AM
A beautiful Triolet Regina, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 8/2/2023 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your receiving POTD, Dear Gina, with this uplifting poem. Your poems always render a beautiful feeling of faith and devotion. Blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 8/1/2023 6:58:00 PM
Regina, you paint such a beautiful picture with your words. Our creator created the wrinkles on those mountains, and those that form, when we smile. :) Your thoughts uplift and inspire, my sweet friend. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/1/2023 4:21:00 PM
A truly brilliant poem that ever so richly deserves its POTD award my good friend. A fav..... God bless,.
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Date: 8/1/2023 11:22:00 AM
A troilet and a monorhyme in one, such uplifting poetry as usual. Congratulations on the POTD Gina McIntosh! xhugs
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Date: 8/1/2023 10:32:00 AM
Dear Gina, congratulations on your POTD honor! Love "mountain wrinkles!" Such wonderful and innovative imagery! Your words reach right into the heart with a smile of joy for such beauty! Blessings and hugs dear friend!
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Date: 8/1/2023 10:24:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Gina, Lovely write
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Date: 8/1/2023 9:03:00 AM
Gina, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 8/1/2023 8:18:00 AM
Excellent form in your Triolet, Gina. Your message is soothing and comforting. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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Date: 8/1/2023 7:57:00 AM
Beautiful poem, congrats on POTD :-) -AG
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Date: 8/1/2023 6:33:00 AM
Gina, this is an excellent triolet that richly deserves the title POTD. Janice
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Date: 8/1/2023 6:06:00 AM
We laud a painter for his beautiful works depicting creation. Should we not praise the Maker of the originals? Your poem does so nicely. Great potd
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Date: 8/1/2023 6:05:00 AM
- Oh... so beautiful, Gina :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Date: 8/1/2023 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD :)
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Date: 8/1/2023 5:29:00 AM
Lovely. Congrats on potd!
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Date: 8/1/2023 5:05:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your POTD kudos, Gina!:-)
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Date: 8/1/2023 5:02:00 AM
Gina, congratulations on your POTD honors!!!!
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Date: 8/1/2023 4:40:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Gina. Enjoy your special day, today.
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Date: 8/1/2023 4:22:00 AM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 8/1/2023 2:41:00 AM
Beautiful poem Regina! Congratulations on POTD! Debx
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Date: 8/1/2023 2:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your faithful write, Gina. Describing the clefts of mountains as wrinkles was a wise choice of words.
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