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High Noon- Big Dale

A washed-up Bank robber named Big Dale Tried to rob bank, near county of vale He didn’t move as quick Got hit with a stick Lawman got word, closed fast on his trail 05/03/2022 Contest: High Noon Sponsor: Joseph May

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Valsa George

Date: 5/9/2022 8:54:00 PM

Yes, he shouldn't go unpunished ! Thank God, the lawman could follow his trail ! Great limerick Alexis. Congratulations on your win !

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/9/2022 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, with this perfect Limerick. Always wish you the best, thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2022 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Alexis. Blessings my friend

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/8/2022 10:00:00 PM

Interestingly written. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/8/2022 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A cute/Limerick write. Have a blessed day/week......................

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 5/8/2022 7:10:00 AM

Congratulations Alexis on your win. Cheers Anne :-)

Joseph May

Date: 5/8/2022 6:18:00 AM

That cowpoke was too slow, Very nicely penned Alexis, Congrats on your win

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/9/2022 9:36:00 AM

Hi Joseph, I’m glad that you liked it. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 5/7/2022 4:56:00 PM

Great Limerick Alexis! I wish you the best of luck in the contest! ~Anna Kaianah

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/5/2022 5:09:00 PM

Big Dale...The bigger they are the harder they fall, great name for your cowboy! Good luck in the contest ALexis! Happy Cinco de Mayo.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/5/2022 12:50:00 PM

No one can not dodge the law as your lawman, who closed fast on the trail on the tracks of Big Dale shows us - great Limerick Alexis. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/5/2022 6:12:00 AM

Good one, Alexis! Janice