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Take me home and I will be your best friend, Will give you years of unconditional love; So come on and give me a chance, Never mind that I will grow, Its all about puppy love, How can you resist; My sweet face, Let me make, You smile! ________________________ July 30, 2015 Poetry/Personification/Hey, you over there Copyright Protected, ID 15-696-100-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Any Poem(you wrote)The Makes You Smile, Sponsor, A Poet Destroyer Seventh Place

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Date: 10/20/2015 3:45:00 PM
Broken Wings this is so cute.
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Date: 10/20/2015 2:25:00 PM
Hey BW, a hearty congratulations on your win! You melted my heart with this one. No fair! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 10/19/2015 5:13:00 AM
Congrats on ur sweet win broken!
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Date: 10/18/2015 6:47:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win a great poem!!!
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Date: 10/18/2015 6:35:00 PM
Aww...so cute, Broken! Nothing like a puppy to make one smile, and your words brought to life all the reasons! Congrats on our nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/18/2015 5:31:00 PM
BW, this is so adorable. Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/18/2015 3:52:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "Peace Now" if you'd like or have time. WUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/7/2015 9:32:00 PM
cute one I am just now seeing . congrats, Constance and for the peek at the puppy.
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Date: 8/7/2015 2:57:00 PM
((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK
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Date: 8/7/2015 8:17:00 AM
Well expressed Constance. I also love the photo. Congrats.
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Date: 8/7/2015 8:17:00 AM
Lovely, BW, but they do grow. We have a 65lb German Shepard/Golden Retriever mix.
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Date: 8/7/2015 4:37:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:06:00 AM
Cutie! Well done, BW, Viv x
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:15:00 AM
And back again wid big congrats on ur win broken!
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Date: 8/6/2015 11:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, BW! Very lovely write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:14:00 PM
This was super sweet but went over the character count, I just adore the write and the pic!
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Date: 7/31/2015 5:10:00 PM
BW, I loved this piece. The love that you have for your puppy is evident in this poem. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/31/2015 2:12:00 PM
this was so pretty and cute....is that your puppy in the photo shoot....I like dogs, just not like most....but here's to you for a great poem, join me in a toast....;)
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Date: 7/31/2015 10:31:00 AM
A 7, I like this one just as well, but you should have left the other on your list to. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/31/2015 8:21:00 AM
- So sweet puppy love, B.W. (7) - Adorable picture :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2015 4:42:00 AM
aww broken wings this is charming - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2015 3:02:00 AM
A beautiful and lovely write BW, I like puppy, excellence............A.M.
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Date: 7/30/2015 11:34:00 PM
Ah so beautiful, love this sweet one BW! Lovely pic too!
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Date: 7/30/2015 11:10:00 PM
Nice one BW, always like anything to do with those loveable dogs. hugs Theresa Marie
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