Here In Paradise

Marmalade 
drips from 
the sky,
and all around me, the world is awash
      in vibrant orange splendor
splashed               with yellow gold

Here in Paradise
   where graceful palms
            lean toward
                   dipping sun
I dip 
     my toes
into the liquid amber of the tide.
     As if to catch the day’s last rays,
I embrace radiance        as it embraces me.

Far off                               in the distance,
the         stretch         of          mountains
         on  a neighboring island
                        cradles
      what remains of the sinking sun.

I have now waded out into the sea. . . 
              my eyes savor
the sky’s color of sweet marmalade
                 and below it,           
         water’s warm honeyed gold
     lapping softly at my shoulders.

Suddenly
         a swarm of  swooping wings
                          bursts from the heavens!

My eyes now feast on hundreds  
                                    and hundreds of dark
      wheeling gulls, 
                               stark against the bright sky -

               the marmalade sunset’s 

surprise finale.


For A Place Called Beautiful Contest of Janis Thompson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 8, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA
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January 1, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Cool Poem! Congratulations Andrea.
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 10:30 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea this poem really has got the WOW factor for me:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Andea, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT
A   Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:06 PM
Andrea, congrats on your best poem. Love LINDA
Neels Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Awesome Andrea, congratulations on your win in Shadow's contest ;) love it
Gifford Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 5:04 AM
Hi, Andrea, I love sunsets and with this poem you put me there. So descriptive! Congrats on your top win. ~~Darlene
Ryerson Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 4:28 AM
WOW, what a description with a nice little surprise at the end! I must have been a dolphin in another life because I LOVE the ocean...You're the best my friend! - Tim
Y. Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations you top win:-) Alexis
Guzzi Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 7:42 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:32 PM
Nicw win... Love SKAT
Omalley Polatnick Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:31 PM
WOW! Now, THAT was beautiful! Such a special piece ... Congratulations!!!
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:21 PM
So beautiful the imagery is elegant. Congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
Arowolo Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Beautiful and lovely piece,Andrea...Congrats on your splendid win. It is well deserving....
Delaney Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Congratulations Andrea: Immersed me in one of my favorite time's of day.....sunrise is the other. Something magical in the atmosphere of endings and beginnings. SuZ
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:02 PM
The imagery is AMAZINGGGGGGGG wow wow wow i can see this so vividly in my minds eye - congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
Terry Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 11:58 AM
Congrats on 1st place win, Andrea. Not surprising. While reading your poem, I found the colors and scenery playing out in front of my eyes. Beautiful. I wished I was there. You are definitely a master of imagery. :) Janece
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July 24, 2015 at 11:12 AM
Beautiful. Deserved win, Andie! I love the marmalade drips from the sky Congratulations! hugs!
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:04 AM
this outstanding poem blew me away Andrea so warm and sensual a masterpiece congrats on 1st place hugs
Harper Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Andrea, I knew I would like this just by the title, so very beautiful, I love the painted sky/poem look. Very sorry to hear of your cat's cancer, such a terrible thing, illness and loss. Hugs.
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September 23, 2013 at 9:08 PM
Enjoying the golden sunset. But darn it is getting cold in the evenings. love phyl
Seal Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Oh, seems that word has to used once more Petal, Congratulations. Great title as well. Nothing on mine for you so don't bother looking lol. Take care, Richard
A  Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 9:13 PM
hi Andrea, you always do so well in contest..congrats... love ~SKAT~
Nair Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 10:17 AM
A leisurely enjoyment of a lovely sunset. Congrats, Andrea!
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August 20, 2013 at 2:44 AM
I'm luxuriating in the beauty of this poem, Andrea. Congrats on your marvelous win! You have all the elements that I love encapsulated here....water, sun, palm trees, and the sweetness of apricot marmalade! Incredible! :) Thanks for your lovely post on my poem, On Silly Childish Stickers! I responded to your post and answered your questions! Hugs!!!
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