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Her Ghost Relives the Night

My shining knight has come to me. He's braved the storms and mire. He's crossed the mountains and the sea. My flesh and soul's desire. And now he lays his sword aside, no warriors to fight. I burn as if I were his bride and this, our wedding night. In passion's chariot we soar. We are the ocean's tides. We crest like waves. We roll; we roar until our need subsides. Now pleasantly (deceit forgot) among the clouds we float. How madly I loved Lancelot; of that the ancients wrote.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/26/2018 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win.
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:04:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 8/23/2018 4:45:00 PM
Congrats on your well-deserved win, Andrea! Smokin' hot poem! Janice
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Date: 8/23/2018 4:31:00 PM
congrats on another winning write.
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Date: 8/23/2018 1:08:00 PM
Beautifully done Andrea don't think I've seen this one before....Love the final two lines.....
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Date: 8/23/2018 12:57:00 PM
Oh, how I loved this piece. I love the era of Lancelot and Guinevere. Congrats on your win Andrea xx:)
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Date: 8/29/2012 10:05:00 AM
I like this Andrea, or should it be guinevere.
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:35:00 AM
Oh, just love a knight in shining armour. I long for one, in fact. Well done, congratulations. Lee
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "One English Quintain" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2011 3:27:00 AM
hey Andrea congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/6/2011 2:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Robert's One English Quintain poetry contest. CR
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:09:00 PM
Splendid poetry Andrea, Congratulations, on your Quintain. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/5/2011 9:30:00 PM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON YOUR HM WITH THIS SPLENDID POETRY ....THANKXX FOR SWEET BLOG COMMENT LUV..
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Date: 9/5/2011 9:18:00 PM
Very beautiful and a true quintain. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/5/2011 8:27:00 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest Andrea
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:50:00 AM
Lovely imaginative write. I don't remember this one or the contest/contest results (maybe I was adbucted by aliens and lost a week...) Congrats on your number one spot, Andrea : )
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Date: 4/21/2011 5:25:00 PM
Boo! Boo! lol... a bbig hi to you Andrea,,, lady queen poet... wrong or right.... whos to say love is to be enjoyed... lol... all i know... i want to be in between... not alive not dead... suffering is not good.... but... glad love speaks no matter the form... take care... and congrats! on your # 1// always p.d.
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your well deserved 1st place win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2011 5:39:00 PM
Great to see you at the top once more Andrea. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/16/2011 1:10:00 PM
Many congrats on getting the number one spot : )
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Date: 4/16/2011 7:15:00 AM
Powerful poem, congrats to you sweetie
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:38:00 AM
Many congrats Andrea for topping the list of winners in Dr Ram's contest. Restless spirit lingers ........interesting. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/15/2011 8:49:00 PM
Wow hon this is real good. Warmest congrats for this super win dear.
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:25:00 PM
Just incredible!!!! Andrea. I knew this would have to be a FIRST PLACE WINNER, many congrats. Lainie
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:04:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your first place win in Dr. Ram's contest.. knew this one would stand out among the entries.. enjoy my friend..luv..
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