Her Ghost Relives the Night

My shining knight has come to me.
He's braved the storms and mire.
He's crossed the mountains and the sea.
My flesh and soul's desire.

And now he lays his sword aside,
no warriors to fight.
I burn as if I were his bride
and this, our wedding night.

In passion's chariot we soar.
We are the ocean's tides.
We crest like waves. We roll; we roar
until our need subsides.

Now pleasantly (deceit forgot)
among the clouds we float.
How madly I loved Lancelot;
of that the ancients wrote.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gentry Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Lovely! Congrats, Andrea!
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Congrats on your well-deserved win, Andrea! Smokin' hot poem! Janice
Waters Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 4:31 PM
congrats on another winning write.
Lawless Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Beautifully done Andrea don't think I've seen this one before....Love the final two lines.....
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Oh, how I loved this piece. I love the era of Lancelot and Guinevere. Congrats on your win Andrea xx:)
Horsman Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 10:05 AM
I like this Andrea, or should it be guinevere.
Ramage Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 1:35 AM
Oh, just love a knight in shining armour. I long for one, in fact. Well done, congratulations. Lee
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "One English Quintain" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 3:27 AM
hey Andrea congrats on your win..David
Ramsdale Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 2:13 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Robert's One English Quintain poetry contest. CR
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 10:09 PM
Splendid poetry Andrea, Congratulations, on your Quintain. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 9:30 PM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON YOUR HM WITH THIS SPLENDID POETRY ....THANKXX FOR SWEET BLOG COMMENT LUV..
Johnson Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 9:18 PM
Very beautiful and a true quintain. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 8:27 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest Andrea
Horne Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Lovely imaginative write. I don't remember this one or the contest/contest results (maybe I was adbucted by aliens and lost a week...) Congrats on your number one spot, Andrea : )
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April 21, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Boo! Boo! lol... a bbig hi to you Andrea,,, lady queen poet... wrong or right.... whos to say love is to be enjoyed... lol... all i know... i want to be in between... not alive not dead... suffering is not good.... but... glad love speaks no matter the form... take care... and congrats! on your # 1// always p.d.
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 4:57 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your well deserved 1st place win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Great to see you at the top once more Andrea. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses
Horne Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Many congrats on getting the number one spot : )
White Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 7:15 AM
Powerful poem, congrats to you sweetie
Mehta Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 3:38 AM
Many congrats Andrea for topping the list of winners in Dr Ram's contest. Restless spirit lingers ........interesting. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta
Mannan Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 8:49 PM
Wow hon this is real good. Warmest congrats for this super win dear.
George   Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Just incredible!!!! Andrea. I knew this would have to be a FIRST PLACE WINNER, many congrats. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Congrats Andrea on your first place win in Dr. Ram's contest.. knew this one would stand out among the entries.. enjoy my friend..luv..
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