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I am like the black rock that wants to become a diamond..A thing that is not beautiful but can become beautiful and valuable.I was out on the porch writing and reading..After reading a work by Edna St. Vincent Millay, the thoughts about the diamond came to mind..Sara
The Japanese Magnolia's blooms color Now a sickly amber after the freeze Layered somber clouds boil threaten downpour That will dampen out on the porch's ease Just a few minutes to gather my thoughts Settle down in the cold, biting, damp air All the stresses, disappointment life brought To the true, living God who reigns, rules fair Fairness in diamond buried deep contained In layers of earth waiting to surface By hands of God releases unrestrained Diamond in rough waiting place in palace Speak to me, Lord, help the diamond's facets Help me grow, Lord, fill me with your nuggets In honor of Brian Strand Contest: Our choice up to fourteen Penned by:Sara Kendrick Click on "About This Poem"

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Date: 2/21/2012 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Your Choice Once More" contest *Sara*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 6:50:00 PM
Sara, this is an awesome work. I extremely enjoyed reading it.Congrats for making Brian's winners' list........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 9:23:00 AM
congrats Sara on a dynamic first place win for eloquence luv..
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Date: 2/19/2012 8:16:00 PM
SARA.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with YOUR wonderfuL win IN BRIAN'S CONTEST.. ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:27:00 PM
It was very helpful for me to see that picture that went with your poem. What a lovely inspiration for you, Sara and now you have a GREAT winning poem here to show us.
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Date: 2/19/2012 4:12:00 PM
I am glad to see this up here where it belongs. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/19/2012 3:50:00 PM
This is a really beautiful spiritual write, Sara.
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Date: 2/19/2012 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Sara with this lovely write, hope you are feeling better, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/18/2012 7:45:00 PM
A lovely poem and a great entry in the contest . Good luck dear Sara. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/18/2012 6:02:00 PM
What a fabulous write my friend! I love the references to a diamond! A glorious stone worth so much due to its rarity and strength! I love your poem! Great Work!!
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