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Heeding the Voice of Instinct

The window sill in prisms of light reflects a half-opened treasure chest, damp in sandalwood mold: in there a mixture of unlived passion of my art lays on ---dried paintbrush, unfinished verses, torn ballet slippers, and sepia tickets for unseen musicales; that behind the cataract night’s hazy pale of night, I struggle with denying the fragile voice of instinct which urges these veins to fulfill my own sense of brightness as I dismiss the echo of this heart pining for expression’s release… yet I remain listless, needing to pour a zeal from running empty. 12//14/2015 Where Echoes Hide Contest For John Lawless

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Date: 1/19/2016 11:32:00 AM
OOh..so much to like. I'm glad you love all those forms and pay them such deep and worthy respect... keep them alive. Still, oh hon, your free verse? It's like the difference between staring at the wolf in the zoo and them coming across one wild, in all its natural splendor. Not trying to convert you, k? <3 And you did what I love to do, used that one sly adverb to bounce off its verb in a fresh way. Daringly renewed, indeed. Thanks for the drop by visit. if able, look at Craig's blog.GOOD
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Date: 1/19/2016 11:33:00 AM
PS... "How old can I get?" !!!!! So relatable, startling question so good, right THERE. Mint, this.
Date: 12/22/2015 1:53:00 AM
Lovely write n win nette.. big congrats!
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:30:00 PM
Nette,, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 12/21/2015 5:51:00 PM
Nette, I enjoyed this....the echoes of youth uncovered in aging trunk filled attic. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 12/18/2015 5:59:00 PM
Love your last three lines! A treasure, indeed.
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Date: 12/15/2015 8:04:00 AM
Inspirational dancing verses captivating the soul, dear nette! Good luck and many hugs!
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Date: 12/15/2015 6:57:00 AM
Nette, every flowing with graceful imagery.. elegant and lovely.. =`) Maligayang Pasko..~~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 12/14/2015 6:24:00 PM
There is rhythm in your heart my friend and a melody in your soul, both dance with the feet of your desires as you enter the catacombs of your life's dreams
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Date: 12/14/2015 2:31:00 PM
Superb poem that entices us to live our dreams and listen to instinct's soft urging!
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Date: 12/14/2015 2:08:00 PM
- A great poem, Nette !!! - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/14/2015 9:38:00 AM
Magnificent! so many colorful phrases and vivid imagery. '...damp in sandalwood mold,' '...torn ballet slippers, and sepia tickets,' and of course '...denying the fragile voice of instinct.' Well done nette! Best wishes, Keith
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